规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as missing words and awkward phrasing. To improve, try to form complete sentences and clarify your ideas. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, you can say: "No, my school doesn't have many rules because it allows students the freedom to be creative."

示例: No, my school doesn't have many rules because it allows students the freedom to be creative and express themselves. This encourages us to think independently and develop our own ideas.

× No, my school doesn't have many rules because my school a lot of students to have freedom to be creative.

✓ No, my school doesn't have many rules because my school allows a lot of students to have freedom to be creative.

The original sentence is missing a verb after 'my school'. The phrase 'my school a lot of students' is incomplete and incorrect. The correct verb 'allows' should be used to indicate that the school permits students to have freedom. This is a 'There be issue' because the sentence lacks the necessary verb to express existence or action.

× I think it depends on the students, but generally I disagree with this point 'cause I think more rules will limit the students imaginations and limit limitations of who they want to become.

✓ I think it depends on the students, but generally I disagree with this point because I think more rules will limit the students' imaginations and limit their potential of who they want to become.

The original sentence uses 'cause' informally; it is better to use 'because' in formal speech. Also, 'students imaginations' lacks the possessive apostrophe, and 'limit limitations' is redundant and unclear. The modal verb 'will' is correctly used here, so no change is needed for modal verbs, but the sentence needs clarity and correct possessive form.

× Yes, I do have a teacher who is actually my mentor at my MFA studies at the United States. She's very inspiring, I think so she's always encouraged students to be a creative, to do whatever they want, to explore their.

✓ Yes, I do have a teacher who is actually my mentor during my MFA studies in the United States. She's very inspiring, I think, so she's always encouraged students to be creative, to do whatever they want, and to explore themselves.

The phrase 'at my MFA studies at the United States' is incorrect; 'during my MFA studies in the United States' is correct. 'To be a creative' is incorrect because 'creative' is an adjective, not a noun; it should be 'to be creative'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'to explore their', which is incomplete; it should be 'to explore themselves'. Also, commas are needed for clarity. These are issues with adjective use and sentence structure.