规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and could be more natural. Try to avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, be careful with grammar, for example, say "a set of rules" instead of "various set of rules."

示例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students are only allowed to eat in the dining hall, not outside the school premises. Additionally, boys and girls are expected to keep a respectful distance from each other to maintain discipline.

建议: Your answer needs to be more structured and clear. Avoid unnecessary words like "Hello" at the end. Use linking words to explain your reasons and try to be more specific about how rules help students.

示例: Yes, I think students would benefit from more rules because they provide clear guidelines that help us stay disciplined. Moreover, these rules can help students develop good character and avoid bad behavior.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Try to finish your sentences and provide specific examples of how the teacher's work impacts students. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

示例: Yes, I have a teacher who does his job very well. For example, he encourages us to follow school rules strictly, which has improved discipline among students. As a result, more students are obedient and respectful than before.

× We have various set of rules in my school.

✓ We have various sets of rules in my school.

The word 'set' is singular, but 'various' implies plural, so 'sets' should be plural to agree with 'various'.

× we don't get to eat outside of the school premises.

✓ we don't get to eat outside the school premises.

The preposition 'outside' does not require 'of' after it in this context; 'outside the school premises' is correct.

× We also don't let boys and girls come together.

✓ We also don't let boys and girls come together.

This sentence is correct; no plural or singular issue here.

× Boys and girls stay at quite a distance from each other.

✓ Boys and girls stay quite a distance from each other.

The preposition 'at' is unnecessary here; 'stay quite a distance' is the correct phrase.

× students will benefit more from the from new set of rules

✓ students will benefit more from the new set of rules

The phrase 'from the from new set' has a repeated 'from' and 'set' is singular which is correct here because 'new set' is singular.

× because these sets as guidelines to assist the student not go out of place

✓ because these sets serve as guidelines to assist the students not to go out of place

'sets' is plural, so 'students' should be plural to match. Also, 'serve as' is the correct phrase, and 'not to go' requires 'to' before the verb.

× help the students build character. Hello.

✓ help the students build character.

The word 'Hello' is unnecessary and unrelated to the sentence; it should be removed.

× I believe my teacher does a good job because I can see how it is effectively changing our lives.

✓ I believe my teacher does a good job because I can see how he is effectively changing our lives.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to a person; 'he' or 'she' should be used depending on the teacher's gender.

× More students are more obedient and compliant with the school rules and regulation, which is a very good thing

✓ More students are more obedient and compliant with the school rules and regulations, which is a very good thing

'rules' is plural, so 'regulation' should also be plural to maintain consistency.

× and it did not happen before so I'm.

✓ and it did not happen before.

The phrase 'so I'm' is incomplete and does not fit the sentence structure; it should be removed for clarity.