规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer needs to be more structured and clear. Start with a direct response, then explain with specific details. Avoid unclear phrases like 'The time, anger'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, there are several rules for students at my school. For example, in the girls' hostel, there are charts displaying bylaws that students must follow, such as curfew timings and gate closing hours. These rules help maintain discipline and ensure safety for everyone.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and repetitive. Try to express your opinion clearly with reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid vague phrases like 'how not to just obey each and everyone'.

示例: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules because currently, many students try to break existing rules or find ways to avoid following them. Therefore, additional rules could help improve discipline and encourage better behaviour among students.

建议: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Focus on one or two teachers and describe why they do their job well. Use complete sentences and avoid unnecessary repetition. Linking words can help your answer flow better.

示例: Yes, I have several teachers who perform their jobs very well. For instance, my mother is a dedicated teacher who always supports her students. Also, my college teacher, Mr. Tabarshar, is very knowledgeable and helpful, which makes learning enjoyable.

× I just saw today only my girls hostel.

✓ I just saw my girls' hostel today only.

The preposition placement is incorrect. 'Today only' should come after the object 'my girls' hostel' to maintain natural English word order. Also, 'girls hostel' needs an apostrophe to show possession as 'girls'' hostel.

× There were bylaws chart everywhere for the students to follow the rules, The time, anger, when to come and when to leave and the closing time of the gate.

✓ There were bylaws charts everywhere for the students to follow the rules: the time, anger management, when to come and when to leave, and the closing time of the gate.

The noun 'chart' should be plural 'charts' because 'everywhere' implies multiple charts. Also, 'The time, anger' is unclear; 'anger' likely refers to 'anger management' or a similar concept. The sentence also needs proper punctuation and article usage for clarity.

× Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

✓ Do you think students will benefit more from more rules?

The modal verb 'would' is used for hypothetical or conditional situations. Since the question is about a likely future benefit, 'will' is more appropriate.

× most of them try to not follow them and make plans to overcome the rules and how not to just obey each and everyone.

✓ most of them try not to follow them and make plans to overcome the rules and not just obey everyone.

The phrase 'try to not follow' is awkward; 'try not to follow' is the correct form. Also, 'each and everyone' should be 'everyone' for natural English usage.

× Yes, I have various teachers who have been doing their job well, like my mother also.

✓ Yes, I have various teachers who have been doing their job well, including my mother.

The phrase 'like my mother also' is awkward. Using 'including my mother' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× And the staff teaching staff in my college, not at school, like Tabarshar and my mom. I'm also.

✓ And the teaching staff in my college, not at school, like Tabarshar and my mom. I am also one of them.

The phrase 'staff teaching staff' is redundant; it should be 'teaching staff.' Also, 'I'm also' is incomplete; it should be 'I am also one of them' to clarify the meaning.