规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói về các quy định cụ thể và lý do tại sao chúng quan trọng.

示例: Yes, at Yasmi school, students must attend their classes on time because punctuality is very important for effective learning.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ như 'roles' nên là 'rules'. Câu trả lời cần mạch lạc hơn và sử dụng các liên từ phù hợp để kết nối ý. Hãy trình bày rõ ràng quan điểm và giải thích cụ thể hơn.

示例: Yes, I believe students can benefit from having more rules, but it depends on how strict they are. For example, clear rules about attending classes regularly help students focus and learn better.

建议: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác như 'perfect girl' và các từ thừa như 'hmm'. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn, đồng thời cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về giáo viên và lý do bạn đánh giá cao cô ấy.

示例: Yes, I had a high school teacher who did her job very well. She was always willing to help me when I needed assistance and encouraged me to think creatively, which I really appreciated.

× Yasmi school students have to attend their classes on time because there's one of the thing that's really important in my school.

✓ Yasmi school students have to attend their classes on time because there is one of the things that's really important in my school.

The phrase 'one of the thing' is incorrect because 'thing' should be plural when used with 'one of the'. The correct phrase is 'one of the things'.

× Yes, I think students can benefit from having more roles.

✓ Yes, I think students can benefit from having more rules.

The word 'roles' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'rules' as the question is about school regulations, not roles.

× However, it's depend on how those rules are.

✓ However, it depends on how those rules are.

The modal verb 'it's' (it is) is incorrect here; the correct form is 'it depends' to agree with the subject and express present tense.

× For instance, if the rule is more strict or some more discipline student feel may feel unwilling to follow.

✓ For instance, if the rules are stricter or some more disciplined students may feel unwilling to follow them.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'rule' should be plural 'rules' to match 'some students'; 'more strict' should be 'stricter' (comparative adjective); 'some more discipline student' should be 'some more disciplined students'; and the sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× However, having clear rules like attending classes regularly help students learn more.

✓ However, having clear rules like attending classes regularly helps students learn more.

The subject 'having clear rules' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' not 'help'.

× Yes, it's my teacher in high school.

✓ Yes, it was my teacher in high school.

The pronoun 'it's' (it is) is incorrect for past reference; 'it was' is correct to refer to a past teacher.

× She was a perfect girl.

✓ She was a perfect teacher.

The word 'girl' is inappropriate in this context; 'teacher' is the correct noun to describe the person being referred to.

× She was willing to help me when I need the helps and always hmm gave me a chance to think out-of-the-box.

✓ She was willing to help me when I needed help and always gave me a chance to think out-of-the-box.

The verb tense should be past 'needed' to match 'was willing'; 'helps' should be singular 'help'; and 'hmm' is unnecessary and removed.

× That I really appreciate of that.

✓ That I really appreciate.

The phrase 'appreciate of that' is incorrect; 'appreciate' does not require 'of' and the sentence is corrected for clarity.