规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer covers many rules, but it is a bit long and slightly redundant. Try to be more concise and use clearer, more natural phrasing. Also, avoid awkward expressions like 'not pertaining to cheating'; instead, say 'not cheating on exams.'

示例: Yes, my school has several important rules, such as maintaining discipline, respecting teachers, completing homework on time, and not cheating on exams.

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and by providing a more specific example or reason. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and try to vary your vocabulary.

示例: Yes, I believe more rules can help students because they provide clear guidance when students are unsure. For example, rules about punctuality can teach responsibility, which is important for their future.

建议: Your answer is good and personal, but it can be improved by making sentences more natural and coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid vague phrases like 'faintly remember.'

示例: Yes, I had a fifth-grade teacher whose teaching was very effective. Because of her unique methods, I still remember many topics, and all her students achieved good grades.

× Yes, there are many rules for students at my school such as maintaining discipline, respecting teachers, not arguing with teachers, completion of homework within given time frame, not pertaining to cheating on exams and others.

✓ Yes, there are many rules for students at my school such as maintaining discipline, respecting teachers, not arguing with teachers, completing homework within the given time frame, not cheating on exams, and others.

The phrase 'completion of homework within given time frame' is incorrect because 'completion' is a noun and does not fit the parallel structure with the other gerunds (maintaining, respecting, arguing). It should be 'completing homework'. Also, 'not pertaining to cheating on exams' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'not cheating on exams'. Additionally, 'within given time frame' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'given time frame'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, because it would give them a sense of guidance wherever they are in doubt.

✓ Yes, because it would give them a sense of guidance whenever they are in doubt.

The phrase 'wherever they are in doubt' is incorrect because 'wherever' refers to location, but 'in doubt' refers to a state or condition. The correct conjunction is 'whenever', which refers to time or occasions. This correction makes the sentence logically and grammatically correct.

× Rules are there to improve a person's capability to function in a society.

✓ Rules are there to improve a person's capability to function in society.

The phrase 'in a society' is incorrect here because 'society' in this context is an uncountable noun referring to the general concept of social life. Using the indefinite article 'a' is unnecessary and incorrect. The correct phrase is 'in society'.

× As more rules are added in school, children become better in their behaviour and functioning.

✓ As more rules are added at school, children become better in their behaviour and functioning.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to the location of 'school' in this context. The correct preposition is 'at' when talking about being present or happening at a place like school. This correction improves the naturalness and correctness of the sentence.

× Yes, I had a teacher in fifth grade who I still remember because the way she used to teach.

✓ Yes, I had a teacher in fifth grade whom I still remember because of the way she used to teach.

The original sentence is missing the relative pronoun object 'whom' and the preposition 'of' after 'because'. 'Who' should be 'whom' as it is the object of the verb 'remember'. Also, 'because the way she used to teach' is incomplete; it should be 'because of the way she used to teach' to correctly express the reason. These corrections fix the sentence structure and improve clarity.