规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and some unclear phrases like "beyond time." Try to use clearer and more precise language. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, there are several rules for students at my school. For example, we have to wear uniforms to promote equality among students. Additionally, punctuality and good attendance are strictly enforced to encourage discipline.

建议: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons using linking words. Avoid repeating phrases like "more and more." Keep your answer natural and concise.

示例: Yes, I believe having additional rules can help students develop better discipline. For instance, stricter regulations encourage punctuality and responsibility, which are essential for academic success.

建议: Your answer has several grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence followed by specific supporting details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid redundancy.

示例: Yes, I have an English teacher who performs her job excellently. She is very punctual and rarely misses a class. Moreover, she is kind and approachable, always motivating us to excel in our studies.

× Of course, there are a lot of regulations that are meant for students, such as wearing a uniform which meant to have a equality between the students and other strict rules such as being punctual and beyond time and having a good attendance.

✓ Of course, there are a lot of regulations that are meant for students, such as wearing a uniform which is meant to have equality between the students, and other strict rules such as being punctual, not being late, and having good attendance.

The phrase 'which meant to have a equality' is incorrect because 'meant' should be 'is meant' to indicate present purpose, and 'a equality' is wrong because 'equality' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'a'. Also, 'beyond time' is unclear and should be replaced with 'not being late' to express punctuality clearly. Commas are added for clarity.

× Yes, I think more and more roles have them to be disciplined that really help them to be very punctual towards the rules and regulation that they have to follow each day.

✓ Yes, I think more and more rules help them to be disciplined and really help them to be very punctual towards the rules and regulations that they have to follow each day.

The word 'roles' is incorrect here; it should be 'rules' as the context is about regulations. Also, 'have them to be disciplined' is awkward and incorrect; it is better to say 'help them to be disciplined'. 'Regulation' should be plural 'regulations' to match 'rules'.

× So more and more regulations are very important in school.

✓ So more and more regulations are very important in school.

This sentence is correct and does not require correction.

× Well, I believe every tutor has doing their job very well.

✓ Well, I believe every tutor is doing their job very well.

The phrase 'has doing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'is doing' to indicate present continuous tense. Also, 'every tutor' is singular, so 'their' is less formal but acceptable; however, 'his or her' could be used for formal correctness.

× But the teacher I know as my English teacher, she's very punctual and I think she barely takes a day off.

✓ But the teacher I know as my English teacher, she's very punctual and I think she rarely takes a day off.

The word 'barely' is incorrect in this context; 'rarely' is the correct adverb to express infrequency. 'Barely' means 'almost not' which does not fit here.

× She is very kind and approachable. She always help us to help to motivate us to be very great in our academics and help us to.

✓ She is very kind and approachable. She always helps us and motivates us to do very well in our academics and helps us.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'She' (third person singular). The phrase 'help to motivate us to be very great' is awkward; better to say 'motivates us to do very well'. The sentence ending 'and help us to.' is incomplete and corrected to 'and helps us.'