规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami serta jelas. Hindari pengulangan kata dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren. Misalnya, gunakan 'for example' dengan tepat dan jelaskan aturan dengan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur.

示例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to be late, wear colorful shoes, or wear skirts above the knees. These rules help maintain discipline and a proper school environment.

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih lengkap dan alami. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide dan jelaskan alasan dengan lebih spesifik.

示例: Yes, I believe that having more rules can benefit students because rules help discipline them. As a result, they become more mature and responsible for their actions.

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide dan berikan detail yang lebih spesifik tentang guru tersebut.

示例: Yes, I do. When I was in senior high school, I had a very disciplined history teacher. He always arrived on time and regularly checked our homework, which motivated us to study harder.

× Yes, there are any rules for student at my school, for example, we cannot come late to school and then we cannot use colorful shoes, just Washington one color black and we cannot use card above the knees.

✓ Yes, there are some rules for students at my school, for example, we cannot come late to school and then we cannot use colorful shoes, just one color black, and we cannot use skirts above the knees.

The word 'any' is incorrect here; 'some' is appropriate when affirming existence of rules. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to match 'rules'. 'Washington one color black' is unclear and likely a mistake; corrected to 'just one color black'. 'Card' is likely a typo for 'skirt'. Also, 'skirts' should be plural to match the context.

× we cannot come late to school and then we cannot use colorful shoes, just Washington one color black and we cannot use card above the knees.

✓ we cannot come late to school and we cannot use colorful shoes, only one color black, and we cannot wear skirts above the knees.

The modal verb 'cannot' is used correctly, but the sentence structure is awkward. Replacing 'then' with 'and' improves clarity. 'Use' is better replaced with 'wear' when referring to clothing items.

× That's all the rules.

✓ Those are all the rules.

'That' is singular, but 'rules' is plural, so 'Those' should be used. Also, 'are' is the correct verb for plural subject.

× Yes, I think so, because rules will discipline the students so they become more adult and more. Responsible for what they do.

✓ Yes, I think so, because rules will discipline the students so they become more mature and more responsible for what they do.

The phrase 'more adult' is incorrect; 'more mature' is appropriate. The period after 'more' is incorrect and breaks the sentence. 'Responsible' should not be capitalized and should be connected to the previous clause.

× Yes, I do I have a very disciplined teacher when I was in the near high school he is he was a history teacher and he always come to the class on time and always check our homework and we'll.

✓ Yes, I do. I had a very disciplined teacher when I was in senior high school. He was a history teacher and he always came to class on time and always checked our homework well.

The sentence has multiple tense and structure errors. 'I have' should be past tense 'I had' to match 'when I was in senior high school'. 'Near high school' is incorrect; 'senior high school' is correct. 'He is he was' is redundant; only past tense 'he was' is needed. 'Come' and 'check' should be past tense 'came' and 'checked'. 'We'll' is likely a typo for 'well'.