规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答が不自然で文法的に誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。具体的なルールを明確に述べ、文を簡潔かつ論理的に構成することが必要です。例えば、具体的な制服の規則や髪型のルールを明確に説明しましょう。

示例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear a blue uniform, and the skirt length should be just above the knee. Additionally, hairstyles must be neat and not too long.

建议: 文法の誤りが多く、繰り返しや冗長な表現が見られます。意見を明確に述べ、理由を簡潔に説明し、接続詞を使って論理的に繋げる練習をしましょう。

示例: I don't think more rules would help students. If the rules are too strict, students might feel restricted and unable to express their feelings or share their ideas freely.

建议: 回答は比較的自然ですが、文法の誤りや言葉の重複があります。より流暢で正確な表現を心がけ、接続詞を使って文をつなげると良いでしょう。

示例: Yes, I do. My high school teacher has a great sense of humor, so his classes are always fun and enjoyable. I really looked forward to attending them.

× For example, we have the school uniform at the school and then the length of the skirt was the ruler well known, the blue or and the hair lengths of the hair was the.

✓ For example, we have the school uniform at school, and the length of the skirt is well known, the color is blue, and the hair length is regulated.

The original sentence has a confusing and incorrect order of adjectives and phrases, making it unclear. The correction rearranges the sentence to clearly state the rules about uniform, skirt length, color, and hair length in a logical and grammatically correct order.

× I don't think so, because if student was strictly strictly, if students have strict rules, they cannot express their feelings or express your their knowledge to the other people, I think.

✓ I don't think so, because if students are strict, if students have strict rules, they cannot express their feelings or their knowledge to other people, I think.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'student was' instead of 'students are' to match plural subject and present tense. Also, 'your their knowledge' is inconsistent pronoun usage. The correction uses plural 'students' and consistent pronouns to improve clarity and grammar.

× I don't think so, because if student was strictly strictly, if students have strict rules, they cannot express their feelings or express your their knowledge to the other people, I think.

✓ I don't think so, because if students have strict rules, they cannot express their feelings or their knowledge to other people, I think.

The phrase 'your their knowledge' mixes pronouns incorrectly. The correction removes 'your' and uses 'their' consistently to refer to students' knowledge.

× My high school teacher was has uh, full of sense of humor and his class was always full of fun and I enjoyed his class very much.

✓ My high school teacher has a great sense of humor, and his class is always full of fun. I enjoyed his class very much.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes past and present tense verbs 'was has'. The correction uses present tense 'has' and 'is' to describe the teacher's qualities and class, which is appropriate when talking about general characteristics, while 'enjoyed' remains past tense for the completed action.