规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "We, my education institution"; instead, say "My school". Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, "Yes, my school has many rules because they help students become more responsible and punctual."

示例: Yes, my school has many rules because they help students become more responsible and punctual.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but contains some unnatural phrases like "At the extent" and "injecting them with too many rules." Try to use simpler and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words like "however" to show contrast. For example, "Yes, students benefit from rules because they become more responsible; however, too many rules can make them feel frustrated and rebellious."

示例: Yes, students benefit from rules because they become more responsible; however, too many rules can make them feel frustrated and rebellious.

建议: Your answer is clear and well-structured, but you can improve by using more precise vocabulary and linking words. For example, instead of "guide us into a good path," say "guide us in the right direction." Also, use "especially" to emphasize your choice. For example, "I think all my teachers do their jobs well, but especially my class teacher, who is very approachable and always guides us in the right direction."

示例: I think all my teachers do their jobs well, but especially my class teacher, who is very approachable and always guides us in the right direction.

× We, my education institution, believe that rules make people be more responsible and help them be more punctual.

✓ We, my education institution, believe that rules make people more responsible and help them be more punctual.

The verb 'make' is followed by the base form of the verb without 'be'. Using 'be' after 'make' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'make people more responsible' rather than 'make people be more responsible'. (English) When using 'make' to indicate causing someone to do something, the verb following 'make' should be in the base form without 'be'. (Nepali) 'make' पछि क्रियाको आधार रूप आउनुपर्छ, 'be' आउनु गलत हो। त्यसैले 'make people more responsible' सही हो।

× At the extent, yes, students do benefit more from rules as they tend to be more responsible and be more disciplined as I mentioned before.

✓ To some extent, yes, students do benefit more from rules as they tend to be more responsible and more disciplined as I mentioned before.

The phrase 'At the extent' is incorrect. The correct prepositional phrase is 'To some extent', which means 'partially' or 'in some degree'. (English) Use 'to some extent' to express partial agreement or degree. (Nepali) 'At the extent' गलत हो, 'To some extent' प्रयोग गर्नुपर्छ जसको अर्थ 'केही हदसम्म' हुन्छ।

× But at the same time, injecting them with too many rules can be very frustrating for them and they tend to add more rebellious.

✓ But at the same time, injecting them with too many rules can be very frustrating for them and they tend to become more rebellious.

The word 'rebellious' is an adjective and cannot be used as a noun. The phrase 'add more rebellious' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'become more rebellious' to describe a change in behavior. (English) Use 'become more rebellious' to indicate increasing rebellious behavior. (Nepali) 'rebellious' विशेषण हो, संज्ञा होइन। 'add more rebellious' गलत छ, 'become more rebellious' सही छ।