规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cavabınızda daha aydın və təbii ifadələr istifadə edin. Cümlələrinizi daha qısa və məntiqli qurun, məsələn, məktəbin qaydalarından danışarkən konkret nümunələr verin və təkrarlardan qaçının.

示例: Yes, my school has several rules. For example, students must wear uniforms and behave respectfully. These rules help maintain discipline and a good learning environment.

建议: Cümlələrinizi daha aydın və tam ifadə edin. Təkrarlardan qaçın və fikrinizi dəstəkləyən səbəbləri və nəticələri daha konkret şəkildə izah edin.

示例: Yes, I believe more rules can help students because without rules, conflicts and disrespectful behavior may increase. Rules create a safe and orderly environment for learning.

建议: Cümlələrinizi daha düzgün və aydın qurun. Müəllim haqqında danışarkən, onun xüsusiyyətlərini və səbəbləri daha dəqiq ifadə edin və qrammatik səhvlərdən çəkinin.

示例: Yes, I have many good teachers. One of them is my future teacher. She is intelligent and kind, and she creates a positive learning environment that helps us succeed.

× I think that every school has their own rules, like about the uniform rules or maybe behavior rules.

✓ I think that every school has its own rules, like about the uniform rules or maybe behavior rules.

The pronoun 'their' is plural, but 'every school' is singular, so the possessive pronoun should be 'its' to agree in number.

× Students have to wear school uniforms and they obey their schools of the rules like they don't behave.

✓ Students have to wear school uniforms and obey their school's rules, like behaving properly.

The phrase 'obey their schools of the rules' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'school's rules' to show possession, and 'like they don't behave' is unclear and should be rephrased to 'like behaving properly'.

× I think that every school put the rules for the students because if they don't put any rules, there is a conflict and unrespectful behaviors to others.

✓ I think that every school should put rules for the students because if they don't have any rules, there will be conflict and disrespectful behavior towards others.

The modal verb 'should' is needed to express obligation. Also, 'put the rules' is better as 'put rules', and 'unrespectful behaviors' is incorrect; 'disrespectful behavior' is the correct form.

× And if they say rules of.

✓ And if they don't have rules.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. It should be restructured to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× One of them is future teacher. She's so intelligent and kind teacher. I love her very much because he he gives us positive in learning environment and a good structure.

✓ One of them is a future teacher. She's an intelligent and kind teacher. I love her very much because she gives us a positive learning environment and good structure.

The pronoun 'he he' is incorrect and should be 'she' to agree with 'teacher'. Also, articles 'a' and 'an' are needed before 'future teacher' and 'intelligent and kind teacher'. The phrase 'gives us positive in learning environment' is incomplete and should be 'gives us a positive learning environment'.