规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, which affects the naturalness and effectiveness. Please provide a clear and complete response directly addressing the question, and avoid grammatical errors. For example, specify what is prohibited and explain briefly.

示例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, using mobile phones during class is prohibited to avoid distractions.

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant, with good use of linking words and reasoning. To improve, try to add a specific example to support your opinion and use a wider range of vocabulary to make your answer more engaging.

示例: I don't think students will benefit from having more rules because too many restrictions can limit their creativity and freedom to express themselves. For example, when I was in school, strict rules made some students less willing to participate in class activities. Instead of more rules, educating students about appropriate behaviour helps them make good decisions independently.

建议: Your answer is relevant and structured, but you can improve by adding more specific details about what the teacher does and how it helped you, using linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, my visual art teacher from middle school does her job exceptionally well. She always encourages me by giving constructive feedback and teaches me specific techniques, such as shading and perspective, which have significantly improved my drawing skills.

× The most common one is the is prohibited in our school.

✓ The most common one is that it is prohibited in our school.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb structure after 'The most common one is'. Adding 'that it is' clarifies the sentence structure, making it grammatically correct and understandable.