图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时应避免重复和冗长，句子结构需更自然流畅。可以直接回答问题，然后用简洁的细节支持，避免不必要的重复。

示例: Yes, I often go to the library because I am a Form 6 student preparing for the HKDSE. I usually study there and borrow educational books to help me with my exams. I visit the library about once a week.

建议: 回答应更直接，避免语法错误和表达不清。使用连接词使内容连贯，并具体说明现在和过去的不同活动。

示例: It depends. When I was younger, I used to borrow comic books from the library. But now, as a secondary school student, I mainly go there to study and prepare for my exams.

建议: 回答中应避免语法错误，表达更自然。内容应更具体，使用连接词使句子流畅。

示例: Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid mainly for two reasons. First, I enjoyed reading comic books like Old Master Q because they were very entertaining. Second, I used the computers there since I didn't have my own at home.

建议: 回答不完整且表达混乱。应完整表达观点，避免语法错误，并用具体例子支持观点。

示例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library for two main reasons. Firstly, many do not have their own computers, so they use the library's computers. Secondly, they enjoy reading various books available there.

× I am a Form 6 student who always need to get myself well prepared for the HKDSE.

✓ I am a Form 6 student who always needs to get myself well prepared for the HKDSE.

主语是单数（a Form 6 student），谓语动词need应加-s，表示第三人称单数形式。

× I always go to the library for studying or borrow some educational books for me to prepare about my examination coverage.

✓ I always go to the library to study or borrow some educational books to prepare for my examination coverage.

动词后应使用不定式to study而非介词for studying；prepare后应接介词for而非about。

× I go in once a week.

✓ I go in once a week.

此句无明显单复数错误，保持原句。

× If you ask me what I usually do in the library, I would say it actually depends because when I was small I will go library to win some comics book and recently I will go to library for studying because I am in secondary school student I usually need to prepare my examination.

✓ If you ask me what I usually do in the library, I would say it actually depends because when I was small I would go to the library to read some comic books and recently I go to the library to study because I am a secondary school student and I usually need to prepare for my examinations.

go后应加介词to；win应改为read更符合语境；comic book应为复数comic books；for studying应改为to study；缺少冠词a；prepare后应加介词for；examination应为复数examinations。

× If you ask me what I usually do in the library, I would say it actually depends because when I was small I will go library to win some comics book and recently I will go to library for studying because I am in secondary school student I usually need to prepare my examination.

✓ If you ask me what I usually do in the library, I would say it actually depends because when I was small I would go to the library to read some comic books and recently I go to the library to study because I am a secondary school student and I usually need to prepare for my examinations.

描述过去习惯动作时应使用过去时would go而非will go。

× Yes, I did go to the library when I was a kid and I go to the library because of tourism.

✓ Yes, I did go to the library when I was a kid and I went to the library for leisure.

时态应统一为过去时went；tourism用词不当，改为leisure更合适。

× First of all is reading some comic book, for example is the old master queue and because I think it was very friendly.

✓ First of all, it is reading some comic books, for example, Old Master Q, because I think it was very enjoyable.

comic book应为复数comic books；句子结构需调整；Old Master Q为专有名词；friendly用词不当，改为enjoyable更合适。

× The second reason is I go there because I can use the computer because when I was small I cannot play my own computer.

✓ The second reason is I go there because I can use the computer since when I was small I could not use my own computer.

时态应统一为过去时could not；play my own computer用词不当，改为use my own computer。

× Yes, Chinese kids do often go to the library because mainly there are two reasons. First of all is because there's. Chinese kids cannot pay a computer on their own, so they will usually go to the library for using the library in the computer.

✓ Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library mainly for two reasons. First of all, Chinese kids cannot pay for a computer on their own, so they usually go to the library to use the computers there.

pay后应加介词for；句子结构需调整；for using the library in the computer表达不清，改为to use the computers there更准确。

× Second, they will watch different books like.

✓ Second, they will read different books.

watch books表达错误，应改为read books；句子不完整，需补充完整表达。