图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but it has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to avoid repeating words like 'usually' and improve sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of saying 'So when I get tedious then easily I read books from online', you can say 'When I feel bored, I prefer reading books online because it gives me pleasure.'

示例: No, I don't often go to the library because there isn't one near my house. Instead, when I feel bored, I usually read ebooks online, which I find enjoyable.

建议: Your answer covers the question but has some grammatical mistakes and lacks coherence. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'especially' to connect your ideas. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'non fiction books' multiple times. Try to be more specific about the types of non-fiction books you like.

示例: In the library, I usually read different kinds of books, such as thrillers and both fiction and non-fiction. However, I am especially passionate about non-fiction books, like biographies and history. Sometimes, I also borrow books to read at home.

建议: Your answer is unclear and has many grammatical errors and repetitions. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid repeating words and use correct prepositions. For example, say 'I think I visited the library when I was in class 6 or 7 because my father took me there to buy some books.'

示例: Yes, I think I first visited the library when I was in class 6 or 7. My father took me there to buy some books, and since then I have enjoyed reading.

建议: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors in word choice and grammar. For example, 'bookies' should be 'kids', and 'attain' is incorrect here. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct vocabulary. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

示例: I don't think Chinese kids often go to the library because they are more interested in technology. Instead of visiting libraries, they usually spend time in reading rooms or science labs to work on projects and research.

× No, usually I don't often go to library because there is no library beside my house.

✓ No, usually I don't often go to the library because there is no library beside my house.

In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library', the definite article 'the' is required before it. So, 'to library' should be corrected to 'to the library'.

× So when I get tedious then easily I read books from online and it gives me pleasure and I usually I usually use ebooks for my.

✓ So when I get bored, I easily read books online and it gives me pleasure. I usually use ebooks for that.

The adverb 'easily' should be placed before the verb 'read' for correct word order. Also, 'get tedious' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'get bored'. 'From online' is incorrect; it should be 'online'. The sentence was also fragmented and repetitive, so it was restructured for clarity.

× In library I usually read books.

✓ In the library, I usually read books.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' when referring to a specific place. Also, a comma after the introductory phrase improves readability.

× I liked different kinds of books such as thrillers book and fiction non fiction book.

✓ I like different kinds of books such as thriller books and fiction and non-fiction books.

The word 'book' should be plural when referring to multiple books. Also, 'thrillers book' should be 'thriller books'. The verb tense was changed to present tense to match the context.

× But I am more passionate about non fiction books so I usually read non fiction books.

✓ But I am more passionate about non-fiction books, so I usually read non-fiction books.

A comma is needed before 'so' when it connects two independent clauses. Also, 'non fiction' should be hyphenated as 'non-fiction'.

× Sometimes I borrow books from library.

✓ Sometimes I borrow books from the library.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' when referring to a specific place.

× Yes, though I didn't remember the exit period when I visited a library.

✓ Yes, though I don't remember the exact period when I visited a library.

The verb 'didn't remember' is incorrect here; the correct form is 'don't remember' to express current lack of memory. Also, 'exit period' is a wrong phrase; it should be 'exact period'.

× But I I I think I visited library in near in class 6 or 7 when my my father took took me to her library for to buy a books from there.

✓ But I think I visited the library around class 6 or 7 when my father took me to his library to buy some books.

Repeated words were removed for clarity. 'In near in class 6 or 7' was corrected to 'around class 6 or 7'. 'Her library' was corrected to 'his library' to match 'my father'. 'For to buy a books' was corrected to 'to buy some books'.

× Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

✓ Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I don't think Chinese bookies often go to library.

✓ I don't think Chinese kids often go to the library.

'Bookies' is incorrect; the intended word is 'kids'. Also, 'to library' should be 'to the library' with the definite article.

× Usually they are more fascinated about technology, so they don't want they usually not visit library.

✓ Usually, they are more fascinated by technology, so they usually do not visit the library.

The correct preposition with 'fascinated' is 'by', not 'about'. The sentence was restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness. 'They don't want they usually not visit library' is incorrect and was corrected to 'they usually do not visit the library'.

× Instead of visiting library they are reading room.

✓ Instead of visiting the library, they prefer reading rooms.

The sentence was unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'They are reading room' is incorrect; it was corrected to 'they prefer reading rooms'. Also, 'the' is needed before 'library'.

× They usually attain some science project, science research or science lab.

✓ They usually attend some science projects, science research, or science labs.

The verb 'attain' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'attend'. Also, plural forms are used for 'projects' and 'labs' to match the context.