图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct grammar and more natural phrasing. Also, avoid repeating words like "that's that's it." For example, you can say: "No, I don't go to the library often. I used to go when I was in high school, but now I prefer studying with my books and digital apps at home."

示例: No, I don't go to the library often. I used to visit it when I was in high school, but nowadays I prefer studying with my books and digital apps at home.

建议: Your answer is clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating "used to" multiple times and improve sentence flow with linking words. For example, you can say: "I usually study my school books and take notes to review at home. Also, I look for books in the library that are not available in shops or bookstores."

示例: I usually study my school books and take notes to review at home. Also, I look for books in the library that are not available in shops or bookstores.

建议: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more natural. For example, instead of "the library of my school," say "my school's library." Also, avoid repeating "time." You can say: "Yes, I often went to my school's library when I was in elementary school. It was fun to spend time with my friends reading books, especially comic books."

示例: Yes, I often went to my school's library when I was in elementary school. It was fun to spend time with my friends reading books, especially comic books.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. It's better to respond politely if you don't know the answer. For example, you can say: "I'm not sure about that because I don't have much information about Chinese children's habits regarding libraries."

示例: I'm not sure about that because I don't have much information about Chinese children's habits regarding libraries.

× Actually no. I used to go to the library when it was a high school students.

✓ Actually no. I used to go to the library when I was a high school student.

The phrase 'a high school students' incorrectly mixes singular and plural forms. 'A' indicates singular, so 'students' should be singular 'student' to match the article.

× However, nowadays I try to study my books and digital apps and that's that's it.

✓ However, nowadays I try to study my books and use digital apps, and that's it.

The original sentence lacks a verb before 'digital apps', making it unclear. Adding 'use' clarifies the action related to digital apps.

× As I said before, I used to study mostly my school books and take notes to study more at home.

✓ As I said before, I used to mostly study my school books and take notes to study more at home.

The adverb 'mostly' is better placed before the verb 'study' to correctly modify the action.

× Also, I used to search for the books I could not find outside the library as in the shop stores and bookstores.

✓ Also, I used to search for the books I could not find outside the library, such as in shops and bookstores.

The phrase 'as in the shop stores and bookstores' is awkward. 'Such as in shops and bookstores' is a clearer and more natural expression.

× I used to go to the library of my school when I was at elementary school.

✓ I used to go to my school's library when I was in elementary school.

'Library of my school' is better expressed as 'my school's library'. Also, 'at elementary school' should be 'in elementary school' to indicate time period.

× It was a very fun time spending time with my friends studying the books, especially the comic books.

✓ It was a very fun time spending time with my friends studying books, especially comic books.

The definite article 'the' before 'books' and 'comic books' is unnecessary here because the reference is general.

× I don't have any idea about the Chinese gates if where they go to the library or not.

✓ I don't have any idea about whether Chinese kids go to the library or not.

'Chinese gates' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'Chinese kids'. Also, the sentence structure is incorrect; 'whether' is needed to introduce the indirect question.