图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct grammar and vocabulary. For example, say 'I am not the kind of person who likes to read, so I rarely go to the library.' Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

示例: I am not the kind of person who enjoys reading, so I rarely visit the library.

建议: Use correct verb tenses and clearer sentence structure. For example, say 'When I go to the library, I usually study subjects for upcoming exams.' Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

示例: When I go to the library, I usually study subjects because I have exams coming up soon.

建议: Focus on answering the question directly with clear sentences. For example, say 'No, I never went to the library as a child because I preferred playing with my friends.' Avoid unclear words and irrelevant information.

示例: No, I never went to the library when I was a kid because I liked playing outside with my friends.

建议: Improve grammar and vocabulary accuracy. For example, say 'In my opinion, Chinese students often go to the library every day because they have an important exam in grade 12 called Gaokao.' Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: In my opinion, Chinese students often visit the library daily because they need to prepare for the important Gaokao exam in grade 12.

× Honestly, I am kind of people who don't like to read, so I am almost done to go to the library.

✓ Honestly, I am the kind of person who doesn't like to read, so I almost never go to the library.

The phrase 'I am kind of people' is incorrect because 'I' is singular and 'people' is plural. It should be 'I am the kind of person' to match singular subject and object. Also, 'I am almost done to go' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'I almost never go'.

× When I'm went to the library I usually read some subject I will go into have an exam tomorrow or soon.

✓ When I go to the library, I usually read subjects I will be tested on tomorrow or soon.

The phrase 'I'm went' is incorrect; 'went' is past tense and 'I'm' is present tense contraction. It should be 'When I go'. Also, the sentence structure is confusing; 'I will go into have an exam' is incorrect. It should be 'subjects I will be tested on'.

× Honoraries when I walk it. I never went to the library. I just a kid who like to play with friends, so I don't think about robbery at all.

✓ Honestly, when I was a kid, I never went to the library. I was just a kid who liked to play with friends, so I didn't think about studying at all.

'Honoraries when I walk it' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; corrected to 'Honestly, when I was a kid'. 'I just a kid who like' lacks verb 'was' and subject-verb agreement; corrected to 'I was just a kid who liked'. 'Robbery' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'studying'.

× In my opinion, I think a Chinese kid going to the library everyday because they have the big exam in grade 12 known as Kauha so they should go to the library to read.

✓ In my opinion, Chinese kids go to the library every day because they have a big exam in grade 12 known as Gaokao, so they should go to the library to study.

'A Chinese kid going' is incorrect; should be plural 'Chinese kids go' to match 'they'. 'Everyday' is an adjective; 'every day' (two words) is correct for frequency. 'Kauha' is likely a misspelling of 'Gaokao'. 'Read' is better replaced with 'study' in this context.