图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy giới hạn câu trả lời trong 4-5 câu, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn.

示例: Yes, I often go to the library near my house because I enjoy reading books. The library is quiet and peaceful, which helps me relax. I usually visit it every day to read and study.

建议: Bạn cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là động từ và số nhiều. Hãy sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I usually read books in the library, especially manga like Doraemon and Conan. They are very interesting, and reading them helps me relax.

建议: Bạn cần chú ý đến thì động từ và số nhiều. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

示例: I didn't go to the library often when I was a kid because there were not many libraries in my city. However, I sometimes went with my parents to borrow books.

建议: Bạn nên tránh đưa ra nhận xét chủ quan hoặc không chính xác về người khác. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng cấu trúc ngữ pháp đúng. Cố gắng cung cấp lý do hợp lý và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

示例: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but I think many children in China visit libraries regularly to study and read books.

× I often go to a library in my fish three times because I like reading books and in library there, there are peace, atmospheres and quiet.

✓ I often go to a library in my city three times a week because I like reading books and in the library there, there is peace, atmosphere, and quiet.

The word 'fish' is likely a typo for 'city'. 'Peace', 'atmosphere', and 'quiet' are uncountable nouns and should be singular. Also, 'in library there' should be 'in the library there' to use the definite article correctly.

× I feel relaxed when I reading books there, so I often go to the library every day.

✓ I feel relaxed when I read books there, so I often go to the library every day.

After 'when I', the verb should be in the base form or simple present tense, not the present participle 'reading'. The correct form is 'read'.

× I usually readings books, especially manga like Doraemon and Conan because it's it's interesting and I feel relaxed when I reading books in library.

✓ I usually read books, especially manga like Doraemon and Conan because it's interesting and I feel relaxed when I read books in the library.

'Read' is the base form of the verb and should be used here instead of 'readings', which is incorrect. Also, 'it's it's' is a repetition and should be 'it's'. 'In library' should be 'in the library' to use the definite article.

× I didn't go to the library when I were a kid because there is there are not many library in my city.

✓ I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because there were not many libraries in my city.

The past tense of 'be' for 'I' is 'was', not 'were'. Also, 'there is there are' is redundant; only 'there were' is needed. 'Library' should be plural 'libraries' because it refers to multiple.

× However, I sometimes go to the library to borrow books with my parents.

✓ However, I sometimes go to the library to borrow books with my parents.

This sentence is grammatically correct and fits the present tense context, so no correction is needed.

× I don't sure about that because I'm Vietnamese.

✓ I'm not sure about that because I'm Vietnamese.

'Don't sure' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I'm not sure' to express uncertainty.

× However, I think that Chinese kids often go to the library because they are very clever and intelligent.

✓ However, I think that Chinese kids often go to the library because they are very clever and intelligent.

This sentence is grammatically correct with proper plural usage and no errors.