图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly, for example, say how often you go and what you like to read. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.

示例: Yes, I often go to the library in the evenings because I enjoy reading biographies and other interesting books.

建议: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating similar phrases. Also, use articles correctly.

示例: In the library, I usually read comic books, but sometimes I also enjoy reading story books.

建议: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and informal expressions. Use past tense consistently and avoid vague phrases like 'all those stuff'. Be more specific and structured.

示例: Yes, when I was a kid, I often went to the library. However, I preferred reading cartoon novels rather than story books.

建议: Your answer is too long and contains irrelevant details. Focus on answering the question directly and use correct grammar. Avoid unnecessary personal stories unless they support your point clearly.

示例: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library, especially in the evenings when their parents take them there to read and study.

× I usually go to library at the evening time.

✓ I usually go to the library in the evening.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'in the evening' is the correct prepositional phrase to indicate time, not 'at the evening time'.

× Yeah, well, in library I like to read books, especially I like to read comic books, but sometimes I do read story books.

✓ Yeah, well, in the library I like to read books, especially comic books, but sometimes I do read story books.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' to specify the place. Also, 'especially I like to read comic books' is better phrased as 'especially comic books' for naturalness.

× When I was a kid, yeah, I go to library, but I don't like to read the story books at that time.

✓ When I was a kid, yeah, I went to the library, but I didn't like to read story books at that time.

Since the time frame is in the past ('when I was a kid'), the verbs should be in the past tense: 'go' becomes 'went' and 'don't like' becomes 'didn't like'. Also, 'the library' requires the definite article, and 'story books' does not need 'the' here.

× At that time I used to read cartoon novels and all those stuff.

✓ At that time I used to read cartoon novels and all that stuff.

'All those stuff' is incorrect because 'stuff' is uncountable and should be preceded by 'all that' instead of 'all those'.

× I know because one of my classmate, her name is Ella and she's 40 years old as well as she's mother of two kids.

✓ I know because one of my classmates, her name is Ella and she's 40 years old as well as she's the mother of two kids.

'One of my classmate' should be 'one of my classmates' because 'one of' requires a plural noun. Also, 'she's mother' needs the definite article 'the' before 'mother'.

× She often told me that she is going with her kids in library at evening time.

✓ She often told me that she goes with her kids to the library in the evening.

The verb tense should be present simple 'goes' to match habitual action. The preposition 'to' is used with 'go' for destination, and 'in the evening' is the correct time expression. Also, 'library' requires the definite article 'the'.