图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và chính xác hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai. Bạn nên dùng thì đúng và câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ. Ví dụ, dùng 'I don't go to the library as often as I did during my university days' thay vì 'I don't go to librarian as often as I used to be in University day'.

示例: I don't go to the library as often as I did during my university days. I really enjoyed spending time there because it was peaceful and quiet, which helped me focus on my studies. I also knew the librarian well since I was a frequent visitor.

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp. Bạn nên dùng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi sai về số nhiều và cấu trúc câu. Ví dụ, 'Libraries usually don't allow food, so people mostly study or read books there.'

示例: In the library, I usually study or read books because food and snacks are not allowed. This helps keep the environment quiet and suitable for learning.

建议: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng cần tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'Public Library' nên viết thường, và câu cuối nên gọn hơn. Bạn có thể thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I went to the library when I was a child. My sister often took me there by bicycle, and although the ride took 10 to 15 minutes, I enjoyed the peaceful atmosphere. I loved browsing through different books, and even though I didn't understand much at that age, it made me happy and curious.

建议: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi nghiêm trọng về từ vựng và ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'Chinese cake' và 'Vietnamese Kiss' là sai. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng từ đúng và câu đơn giản. Ví dụ: 'I'm not sure about Chinese children, but Vietnamese children often go to libraries and bookstores because there are many interesting books and comics.'

示例: I'm not sure about Chinese children, but Vietnamese children often visit libraries and bookstores. Nowadays, there are many books and comic genres that attract young readers.

× I don't go to librarian as often as I used to be in University day.

✓ I don't go to the library as often as I used to in my university days.

The word 'librarian' is a person, but the student meant the place 'library'. Also, 'University day' should be plural 'university days' to indicate multiple days during university time. 'Used to be' is incorrect here; it should be 'used to' to indicate past habit.

× I really love spending time there as it had this peaceful quiet life where I can really focus on my study.

✓ I really love spending time there as it has this peaceful, quiet atmosphere where I can really focus on my studies.

The phrase 'had this peaceful quiet life' is incorrect; 'has' is needed to indicate present state. Also, 'life' is not appropriate here; 'atmosphere' fits better. 'My study' should be plural 'my studies' to refer to academic work.

× In fact, I knew the librarian quite well as I frequent visitor.

✓ In fact, I knew the librarian quite well as I was a frequent visitor.

The sentence lacks the verb 'was' to link the subject and complement. 'Frequent visitor' needs an article 'a' before it. Also, 'frequent' is an adjective describing 'visitor'.

× Well there's not much we can do apart from studying and reading books.

✓ Well, there isn't much we can do apart from studying and reading books.

The phrase 'there's' is singular, but 'much' is uncountable and singular, so 'there isn't' is correct. The sentence needs a comma after 'Well' for clarity.

× I mean no library are allowed allow students to bring snacks of food is so we're studying mostly.

✓ I mean no library allows students to bring snacks or food, so we're mostly studying.

'Library' is singular, so the verb should be 'allows' (third person singular). 'Allow' is repeated mistakenly. 'Snacks of food is so' is incorrect; it should be 'snacks or food'. The sentence structure is awkward and corrected for clarity.

× Well, I'm not sure about Chinese cake, but for Vietnamese Kiss I think they really love going to library as well as bookstore 'cause nowadays there are a wide range of books and comic genres that attract young readers.

✓ Well, I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but for Vietnamese kids, I think they really love going to the library as well as bookstores because nowadays there is a wide range of books and comic genres that attract young readers.

'Cake' and 'Kiss' are incorrect words; should be 'kids'. 'Library' and 'bookstore' need articles and plural forms: 'the library' and 'bookstores'. 'There are a wide range' should be 'there is a wide range' because 'range' is singular.