图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中有语法错误和用词不当，例如“it turns”和“refrain the class content”表达不清晰。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且注意句子结构的完整性。

示例: Yes, I often go to the library to review my class materials and work on my assignments.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，如“completed my assignment”和“accumulate to accumulate”。建议简洁明了地表达，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: I usually review my class materials and complete my assignments. Sometimes, I bring books to read to gather information for my research.

建议: 回答不连贯且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，并用简单句子说明原因，避免复杂结构。

示例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I couldn't stay calm, and my parents were afraid I would disturb others.

建议: 回答中语法错误频繁，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的语法结构，明确表达观点，并避免重复。

示例: No, Chinese kids don't often go to the library because their parents worry they might disturb others and may not understand academic books.

× Yes, it turns and I often go to the library to refrain the class content and my assignment.

✓ Yes, it turns out that I often go to the library to review the class content and my assignment.

原句中“it turns”用法错误，正确表达应为“it turns out”，表示“事实是”。此外，“refrain”用错，正确动词应为“review”，表示复习。

× As I say, I usually review my class materials and completed my assignment and sometimes I won't bring some book to reading to accumulate to accumulate some profile for my research.

✓ As I said, I usually review my class materials and complete my assignments, and sometimes I bring some books to read to accumulate some profiles for my research.

“As I say”时态错误，应为过去时“As I said”。“completed”应为动词原形“complete”，与“usually”搭配使用。"won't bring"不符合语境，应为“bring”。“to reading”应为“to read”。重复“to accumulate”应去掉一个。

× No to be honest when I'm a kid I can be calm down or clean so I don't go to so I won't go. Went to library usually and I my parents scared me bother other people in library.

✓ No, to be honest, when I was a kid, I could be calm and quiet, so I didn't usually go to the library because my parents were afraid I would bother other people in the library.

“I'm a kid”时态错误，应为过去时“when I was a kid”。“can be calm down or clean”表达不当，应为“could be calm and quiet”。“don't go to so I won't go”结构混乱，应改为“didn't usually go”。“Went to library usually”语序错误，应改为“usually go to the library”。“my parents scared me bother”应为“my parents were afraid I would bother”。

× No, definitely no, because their parents often often don't want they going to a library.

✓ No, definitely not, because their parents often don't want them to go to the library.

“don't want they going”结构错误，应为“don't want them to go”，动词不定式用法正确。

× The kids can bother other people and they can understand some famous books, They can understand that that academic knowledge.

✓ The kids can bother other people, but they cannot understand some famous books or academic knowledge.

句子逻辑不清，且“they can understand that that academic knowledge”重复且表达错误，应改为“they cannot understand some famous books or academic knowledge”。