图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide clearer time references.

示例: I used to visit the library often when I was in school to find educational materials. However, after I started working, I haven't had much time to go. Nowadays, I prefer reading poetry books rather than educational ones.

建议: Improve your answer by using correct verb tenses and clearer sentence structure. Use linking words to show progression and be more specific about the subjects you read.

示例: When I was a student, I usually borrowed fairy tales to read. After reaching grades 7 or 8, I started reading more educational books, such as chemistry and science textbooks.

建议: Focus on using past tense consistently and avoid repetition. Clarify your points with proper linking words and correct prepositions to make your answer more natural and coherent.

示例: Yes, I often went to the library as a kid. We had special lessons that required us to visit our school library once or twice a week.

建议: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about the reasons why kids visit the library.

示例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library to increase their knowledge. They use it to learn about current events around the world and to find educational materials for their studies.

× When I was in my school, I used to visit library to have some great stuff for my education and after I started working, I didn't get any time to visit library.

✓ When I was in school, I used to visit the library to get some great materials for my education, and after I started working, I didn't have any time to visit the library.

The phrase 'in my school' is incorrect; it should be 'in school' to indicate attending school. 'Visit library' lacks the definite article 'the' before 'library'. 'Have some great stuff' is informal and vague; 'get some great materials' is clearer. 'Didn't get any time' should be 'didn't have any time' for correct verb usage.

× When I was student I usually take fairy tales to read and after maybe 7 or 8 standard I start reading some educational knowledgeable stuff like chemistry, science and all.

✓ When I was a student, I usually took fairy tales to read, and after maybe 7th or 8th standard, I started reading some educational and knowledgeable materials like chemistry, science, and so on.

Missing article 'a' before 'student'. The verb tense should be past ('took', 'started') to match 'When I was'. '7 or 8 standard' should be '7th or 8th standard' to indicate grade levels. 'Educational knowledgeable stuff' is awkward; 'educational and knowledgeable materials' is clearer.

× Yes, I often go to a library. Yes, we have a special lecture for it in to visit our school library. So couple or twice time a week we have to visit there.

✓ Yes, I often went to the library. Yes, we had a special lecture about visiting our school library. So, a couple of times or twice a week, we had to visit there.

The question is about past habits, so 'often go' should be 'often went'. 'A library' should be 'the library' if referring to a specific one. 'Have a special lecture for it in to visit' is incorrect; it should be 'had a special lecture about visiting'. 'Couple or twice time a week' is incorrect; correct form is 'a couple of times or twice a week'.

× Oh yes, Chinese kids often go to library as to increase their knowledge and, uh, to get the, the things what's happening around the world and get some educational material for them.

✓ Oh yes, Chinese kids often go to the library to increase their knowledge and to get information about what is happening around the world and to get some educational material for themselves.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'library'. 'As to increase' is incorrect; 'to increase' is correct. 'The things what's happening' is incorrect; it should be 'information about what is happening'. 'For them' is better expressed as 'for themselves' to indicate benefit.