图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 文法の誤り（"go to library" は "go to the library" が正しい）と冗長な表現を避けるために、より自然で簡潔な表現を心がけましょう。例えば、"I often go to the library with my sons, and sometimes I go alone to study English and Chinese." のようにすると良いです。

示例: I often go to the library with my sons, and sometimes I go alone to study English and Chinese.

建议: 文法の誤りと不自然な表現が多いです。"circumstance" はこの場合不適切で、"environment" や "atmosphere" を使うと良いでしょう。また、文を分けて明確に伝えることが大切です。例えば、"I usually study English because the environment is very good. The temperature is cool, so I can concentrate." のように表現しましょう。

示例: I usually study English because the environment is very good. The temperature is cool, so I can concentrate.

建议: 文が途中で切れており、意味が伝わりにくいです。"go to library" は "go to the library" に直し、文を完結させましょう。例えば、"Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid because I went there to study my homework. It was a quiet place." のようにすると良いです。

示例: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid because I went there to study my homework. It was a quiet place.

建议: 文が途中で終わっており、"circumstance" の使い方も不適切です。"environment" や "place" を使い、文を完結させましょう。例えば、"Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because they study hard. The library is a good place for them because it is quiet." のように表現してください。

示例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because they study hard. The library is a good place for them because it is quiet.

× Yes, I often go to library with my sons and I sometimes to go by myself to study English and Chinese.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library with my sons and I sometimes go by myself to study English and Chinese.

'Library' is a countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'I sometimes to go' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I sometimes go'.

× I usually study English because it's a circumstance is very good for me it's temperature keep so cool I can study.

✓ I usually study English because the environment is very good for me; the temperature stays cool so I can study.

'Circumstance' is not the correct word here; 'environment' fits better. Also, 'it's temperature keep so cool' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'the temperature stays cool'. The definite article 'the' is needed before 'environment' and 'temperature'.

× Yes, I often went to library when I was a kid because I went there to study my. Homework. And it's very.

✓ Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid because I went there to study my homework.

Again, 'library' requires the definite article 'the'. The sentence 'And it's very.' is incomplete and should be removed or completed. 'Homework' does not need a period after 'my'.

× Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because they study hard and library it's a good circumstance for them because it's quiet and.

✓ Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because they study hard and the library is a good environment for them because it's quiet.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' when referring to a specific place. 'Circumstance' is not appropriate here; 'environment' is better. The sentence is incomplete and should end properly.