图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Instead of 'normally I will go to library once a week,' say 'I usually go to the library once a week.' Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating 'go to library' unnecessarily.

示例: I usually go to the library once a week to borrow books and study in a quiet environment.

建议: Your answer has good content but the grammar and sentence structure need improvement. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, for example, 'I usually choose books to read, especially those related to business because my job is in marketing. This helps me learn case studies and improve my marketing skills.'

示例: I usually choose books to read, especially those related to business, because my job is in marketing. This helps me learn case studies and improve my marketing skills.

建议: Your answer does not directly address the question about your childhood. Instead, you talk about your current situation. Try to answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. For example, 'No, I did not go to the library much as a child because my family did not have a habit of visiting libraries.'

示例: No, I did not go to the library much as a child because my family did not have a habit of visiting libraries. We usually read books at home instead.

建议: Your answer has good ideas but the grammar and clarity need improvement. Use linking words and correct grammar to make your answer more coherent. For example, 'I don't think Chinese kids often go to the library because many parents are busy and don't have time to take their children there. Therefore, children usually study and read books at home.'

示例: I don't think Chinese kids often go to the library because many parents are busy and don't have time to take their children there. Therefore, children usually study and read books at home.

× Yes, normally I will go to library once a week.

✓ Yes, normally I go to the library once a week.

The use of 'will' to express habitual actions is incorrect here. In English, the simple present tense is used to describe habitual actions or routines. Also, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× I always will choose books to read.

✓ I always choose books to read.

Using 'will' with 'always' to indicate habitual actions is incorrect. The simple present tense should be used to express regular habits or routines.

× Sometimes I will read some books related with the business.

✓ Sometimes I read some books related to business.

The correct preposition to use with 'related' is 'to', not 'with'. Also, 'the business' is incorrect here; 'business' as a general field does not require the definite article.

× Because my job is marketing, I need to learn some cases to improve my mind more marketing sense.

✓ Because my job is in marketing, I need to study some cases to improve my marketing sense.

The phrase 'my job is marketing' is better expressed as 'my job is in marketing'. 'Learn some cases' is awkward; 'study some cases' is more appropriate. 'Improve my mind more marketing sense' is ungrammatical; it should be 'improve my marketing sense'.

× Uh, actually no, because I don't have the kid.

✓ Uh, actually no, because I don't have a kid.

The singular countable noun 'kid' requires an article. 'The kid' implies a specific child already known, which is not the case here.

× Uh, I'm not married, so I just go to the library by myself, but sometimes I will go with my friend.

✓ Uh, I'm not married, so I usually go to the library by myself, but sometimes I go with my friend.

The use of 'just' is less appropriate than 'usually' to express habitual action. Also, 'will' is not used for habitual actions; simple present tense is preferred. 'Friend' should be singular if referring to one friend.

× I don't think so because you know in for Chinese and lots of the kids read some books in their home because their parents is very busy, don't have the time to bring the kids go to the library.

✓ I don't think so because, you know, in China lots of kids read books at home because their parents are very busy and don't have time to take the kids to the library.

'In for Chinese' is incorrect; it should be 'in China'. 'Lots of the kids' is better as 'lots of kids' without 'the'. 'In their home' should be 'at home'. 'Parents is' should be 'parents are' to agree in number. 'Bring the kids go' is ungrammatical; it should be 'take the kids to'.

× So always the kids study in their home.

✓ So, kids always study at home.

The adverb 'always' is better placed before the verb. 'The kids' is less appropriate here; 'kids' without 'the' is more natural when speaking generally. 'In their home' should be 'at home'.