图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Старайтесь отвечать более чётко и структурировано. Избегайте лишних пауз и слов-паразитов, таких как "umm" и "uh". Начинайте с прямого ответа на вопрос, затем добавляйте детали, используя связующие слова для логичности.

示例: No, I don't often go to the library now. However, when I was a student, I used to visit libraries frequently to borrow books for entertainment rather than study.

建议: Ответ должен быть более ясным и связным. Используйте полные предложения и связывающие слова, чтобы объяснить свои мысли. Избегайте непонятных фраз и старайтесь конкретизировать, что именно вы делаете в библиотеке.

示例: Usually, I borrow books from the library to read. I also notice that many students use the library as a quiet place to study or work remotely.

建议: Старайтесь строить предложения грамотно и избегать ошибок. Используйте связующие слова для плавного перехода между идеями. Уточняйте детали, чтобы сделать ответ более содержательным.

示例: Yes, I often went to libraries in my hometown as a child. Since there were no phones or Internet, reading books was one of my main sources of entertainment.

建议: Отвечайте прямо на вопрос и избегайте неопределённых выражений. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и старайтесь выражать свои мысли ясно и грамотно.

示例: I'm not sure about Chinese kids specifically, but I believe children worldwide enjoy reading books and value education for their future.

× I used to go to the libraries when I was a student and attended for a school.

✓ I used to go to the libraries when I was a student and attended school.

The phrase 'attended for a school' is incorrect. The verb 'attend' does not require the preposition 'for' when referring to school. The correct form is 'attended school'.

× I used to bring all these books and not for my education but for entertaining myself.

✓ I used to bring all these books not for my education but for entertaining myself.

The phrase 'and not for my education but for entertaining myself' is awkward due to the unnecessary conjunction 'and'. Removing 'and' improves sentence flow and clarity.

× Take a parks book and treat them.

✓ Take a park's book and treat it.

'Parks' should be possessive singular 'park's' to indicate the book belongs to the park. Also, 'them' is plural pronoun but 'a book' is singular, so it should be 'it'.

× I'm aware that most students are using the place of library as they are coworking Centers for studying or working remotely because.

✓ I'm aware that most students use the library as a coworking center for studying or working remotely.

The phrase 'the place of library' is incorrect; it should be 'the library'. Also, 'coworking Centers' should be singular 'coworking center' to match 'the library'. The sentence is also incomplete and awkward; rephrasing improves clarity.

× Yes, of course, I've been to many libraries, so my hometown.

✓ Yes, of course, I've been to many libraries in my hometown.

The preposition 'so' is incorrect here; it should be 'in' to indicate location.

× The reason is that it was one of the entertaining sessions at that time without the phone and Internet.

✓ The reason is that it was one of the entertaining activities at that time without phones and the Internet.

'Sessions' is not appropriate here; 'activities' fits better. Also, 'the phone and Internet' should be 'phones and the Internet' to generalize and specify.

× So it was really entertaining and interesting for me as a kid to reading a box like this.

✓ So it was really entertaining and interesting for me as a kid to read books like this.

The verb 'to' should be followed by the base form 'read', not 'reading'. Also, 'a box' is incorrect; it should be 'books'.

× Umm, I'm not really umm keen on this about Chinese kids going to the libraries that I don't think that kids all over the world are enjoying to reading books and having a proper educational knowledge in their future life.

✓ Umm, I'm not really keen on this topic about Chinese kids going to libraries. I don't think that kids all over the world enjoy reading books and gaining proper educational knowledge for their future lives.

The sentence is long and confusing. 'Enjoying to reading' is incorrect; it should be 'enjoy reading'. 'Having a proper educational knowledge' is awkward; 'gaining proper educational knowledge' is better. 'In their future life' should be plural 'lives'.