图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

× I like the library as the atmosphere here always makes me down and I can focus on my study more carefully.

✓ I like the library as the atmosphere here always makes me feel down and I can focus on my study more carefully.

句中缺少动词“feel”，导致表达不完整。应使用“makes me feel down”表示“让我感到沮丧”。

× Usually I bring my homework and walk to the library. Library is very silent and I can focus on these items more carefully.

✓ Usually I bring my homework and walk to the library. The library is very quiet and I can focus on these items more carefully.

“Library”前应加定冠词“the”，表示特指图书馆。同时，“silent”通常形容人或环境的无声，形容图书馆环境更常用“quiet”。

× Actually no, because the library in my hometown is very far away from my house and when I was a kid my parents always think go to the library by myself is not very safe.

✓ Actually no, because the library in my hometown was very far away from my house and when I was a kid my parents always thought going to the library by myself was not very safe.

描述过去情况时，动词时态应使用过去式，如“was”和“thought”。此外，“think go”结构不正确，应改为“thought going”。

× I think it depends on the kids itself as some people like to go to the library while others like at home.

✓ I think it depends on the kids themselves as some people like to go to the library while others like to stay at home.

“kids”是复数，反身代词应使用“themselves”。此外，“like at home”缺少动词，应补充“to stay”。