图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免语法错误，如“usually I just go there before the examination”应改为“usually I only go there before exams”。同时，回答可以更简洁，避免重复表达。

示例: Not really, because there isn't a library near my house. I usually only go there before exams to study.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然，如“for review the most important materials and paper”应改为“to review the most important materials and papers”。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Since I don't visit the library often, I usually go there to review the most important materials and papers related to my exams.

建议: 回答中有多处语法错误，如“go to my school delivery”应为“went to my school library”，“before my parents go to school to take me to home”表达不清且语法错误。建议简化句子并使用正确时态。

示例: Yes, when I was a kid, I went to my school library almost every day. I stayed there alone before my parents picked me up, so I usually read books there.

建议: 回答较为自然，但可以更具体，增加细节说明。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯。

示例: I haven't thought about it much, but I believe many Chinese kids do go to the library because they are often encouraged to read many books to improve their reading skills.

× Not really because there's no library near my house so usually I just go there before the examination.

✓ Not really because there isn't a library near my house, so usually I just go there before the examination.

这里使用了缩写"there's"，但后面接的是单数名词"library"，应使用"there isn't"表示否定。"there's"是"there is"的缩写，否定形式应为"there isn't"。

× Because I don't go to library very often, so usually I go there just for review the most important materials and paper which is about my examination.

✓ Because I don't go to the library very often, I usually go there just to review the most important materials and papers which are about my examination.

"go to library"缺少定冠词"the"，应为"go to the library"。此外，"for review"应改为"to review"，因为动词不定式"to review"表示目的。"paper"应为复数"papers"，因为指多份材料。

× Yes, when I was a kid I go to my school delivery almost every day because before my parents go to school to take me to home, I have to stay in school by myself, so I usually read there.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid I went to my school delivery almost every day because before my parents went to school to take me home, I had to stay in school by myself, so I usually read there.

描述过去的动作时，动词应使用过去式。"go"应改为"went"，"go to school"应改为"went to school"，"have to"应改为"had to"。此外，"take me to home"中"to"多余，应为"take me home"。

× Yes, when I was a kid I go to my school delivery almost every day because before my parents go to school to take me to home, I have to stay in school by myself, so I usually read there.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid I went to my school delivery almost every day because before my parents went to school to take me home, I had to stay in school by myself, so I usually read there.

句子中描述过去的情况，动词应使用过去时态，不能用现在时态"go"和"have"。

× Yes, when I was a kid I go to my school delivery almost every day because before my parents go to school to take me to home, I have to stay in school by myself, so I usually read there.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid I went to my school delivery almost every day because before my parents went to school to take me home, I had to stay in school by myself, so I usually read there.

"take me to home"中"to"是不必要的，正确表达是"take me home"。

× I haven't considered that before, but I think yes, because we were asked to read many books to improve our reading skills.

✓ I haven't considered that before, but I think yes, because we are asked to read many books to improve our reading skills.

句子中"we were asked"使用了过去时态，但根据上下文，应该是现在时态，表示现在的习惯或规定，应改为"we are asked"。