图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and could be more natural. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to make your answer smoother. Also, use articles correctly like 'the library'.

示例: Yes, I often go to the library because I am preparing for my IS exam. Therefore, I visit the library daily to study in a quiet environment.

建议: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words and correcting small grammar mistakes. For example, use 'sometimes' instead of 'sometime' and add connectors to make your answer more coherent.

示例: I usually study alone in the library. However, sometimes I prepare for group study sessions with four or five friends, where we discuss our study topics together.

建议: Your answer has some grammar and vocabulary errors that affect clarity. Try to use past tense correctly and avoid unclear words like 'elves'. Also, make your sentences more natural and concise.

示例: As far as I remember, I did not go to the library when I was a kid. I usually studied at home because it was a cozy environment, and my parents helped me with my studies.

建议: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using better vocabulary and sentence structure. Avoid phrases like 'study on library' and use 'study in the library'. Also, try to be more concise and clear.

示例: Actually, I am from Bangladesh, so I don't know much about Chinese children. However, I have heard that many Chinese students prefer studying in libraries rather than at home.

× Actually I am preparing for my IS exam so I have to go to library frequently.

✓ Actually I am preparing for my IS exam so I have to go to the library frequently.

In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library' in this context, the definite article 'the' is required before the noun. Without 'the', the sentence sounds incomplete or incorrect. So, 'go to library' should be 'go to the library'. This is a common article usage rule in English.

× So actually I go to library daily.

✓ So actually I go to the library daily.

Same as above, the definite article 'the' is necessary before 'library' when referring to a specific place. Omitting 'the' is incorrect in this context.

× Sometime I prepare for group study with my friends in the library.

✓ Sometimes I prepare for group study with my friends in the library.

The word 'Sometime' is incorrect here; it should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, 'group study' is fine, but 'Sometimes' is the correct adverb form to express occasional action.

× So we gather together, four to five of us and discuss our study topic.

✓ So we gather together, four to five of us, and discuss our study topics.

When referring to multiple topics, the plural form 'topics' is appropriate. Since multiple people are discussing, it is likely multiple topics are involved. Also, a comma after 'us' improves clarity.

× As far as I remembered, when I was kid, I did not go to the library.

✓ As far as I remember, when I was a kid, I did not go to the library.

The phrase 'As far as I remembered' should be 'As far as I remember' because the speaker is referring to a present recollection. Also, 'when I was kid' is missing the article 'a' before 'kid'. Both corrections are necessary for grammatical accuracy.

× I often used to study in my home because the home is really cozy environment on that time for me.

✓ I often used to study at my home because the home was a really cozy environment at that time for me.

The preposition 'in' is less common with 'home'; 'at my home' is more natural. Also, 'the home is really cozy environment' is incorrect; it should be 'the home was a really cozy environment' to match past tense and include the article 'a' before 'cozy environment'. 'On that time' should be 'at that time' as the correct preposition for time expressions.

× So I used to study in my home with my parents elves.

✓ So I used to study at my home with my parents themselves.

The word 'elves' is incorrect here; the correct reflexive pronoun is 'themselves' referring back to 'my parents'. Also, 'in my home' should be 'at my home' as explained before.

× Actually I am from Bangladesh so I don't know about the Chinese state, but I hear the news that Chinese people are more interested to study on library rather than study on home, so that's all I know about them.

✓ Actually I am from Bangladesh so I don't know about the Chinese state, but I hear the news that Chinese people are more interested in studying in the library rather than studying at home, so that's all I know about them.

The phrase 'interested to study on library' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'interested in studying'. Also, 'study on library' should be 'studying in the library' and 'study on home' should be 'studying at home'. These prepositions are standard in English for these contexts.