图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa rõ ràng và hơi lặp lại. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi trước, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách ngắn gọn và tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tránh dùng từ "I'd rather go to the library" khi bạn không thường xuyên đến thư viện.

示例: No, I don't often go to the library because it is far from my house. Instead, I usually buy books from local bookstores and read them at home.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và sử dụng liên từ để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ vựng chính xác hơn như "novels" thay vì "a novel self".

示例: When I visit the library, I usually browse the book sales to find my favorite types of books, such as novels.

建议: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đơn cho các hành động đã xảy ra và tránh lặp từ. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

示例: Yes, I used to go to the library a lot when I was in middle school with my sister. She showed me the way, and I enjoyed spending time there.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ hợp lý để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

示例: I'm not sure because I'm Vietnamese, but I believe Chinese kids often go to the library because books open up a new world and help people learn many things.

× Ah, I'd rather go to the library, as the library of a city is far from my house, so I often buy books from local bookstores and read books at home.

✓ Ah, I'd rather go to the library, but the library in my city is far from my house, so I often buy books from local bookstores and read books at home.

The phrase 'the library of a city' is unnatural; it should be 'the library in my city' to specify location correctly. Also, 'as' is better replaced with 'but' to show contrast between preference and reality.

× Well in the past I have gone to the library several times and I often go around the book sales to look for my favorite types of books like a novel self.

✓ Well, in the past I went to the library several times and I often go around the book sales to look for my favorite types of books like novels.

The present perfect 'have gone' is less appropriate with 'in the past' which specifies a finished time; simple past 'went' is better. Also, 'a novel self' is incorrect; it should be 'novels' as plural noun.

× Definitely. I often, oh, I used to go to library a lot when I was a middle school student with my sister.

✓ Definitely. I often, oh, I used to go to the library a lot when I was a middle school student with my sister.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× She show me the way to the library and I and I enjoy all the favorite things in that place.

✓ She showed me the way to the library and I enjoyed all the favorite things in that place.

The verb 'show' should be in past tense 'showed' to match the past context. Also, 'I enjoy' should be 'I enjoyed' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Actually I really don't know because I'm Vietnamese and but I I do believe that Chinese kids love to go to the library as book share a new world to everyone and we human beings can learn many things from books.

✓ Actually, I really don't know because I'm Vietnamese, but I do believe that Chinese kids love to go to the library as books share a new world with everyone and we human beings can learn many things from books.

The conjunctions 'and but' are redundant; only 'but' is needed. Also, 'book share' should be 'books share' to agree in number, and 'share a new world to everyone' should be 'share a new world with everyone' to use correct preposition.