图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có phần lặp từ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn.

示例: I don't often go to the library because I prefer learning online and chatting with friends through the internet.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: In the library, I usually read books, study quietly, and sometimes chat with my friends.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt với cấu trúc rõ ràng và chi tiết cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và sửa một số lỗi nhỏ về số nhiều và danh từ đếm được.

示例: No, I didn't go to libraries much when I was a kid because I didn't enjoy being quiet for a long time. Instead, I preferred playing outside or reading books at home where I felt more comfortable. Also, the library was quite far from my house, so it wasn't very convenient to visit often.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp và câu không mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn.

示例: I'm not sure about Chinese children because I'm from Vietnam. However, in my country, many kids often go to the library to study and borrow books, especially on weekends, which helps them improve their knowledge.

× I don't often go to the the library because I trusted in learning and learning and talking to your online.

✓ I don't often go to the library because I trust learning and talking online.

The phrase 'trusted in learning and learning and talking to your online' is incorrect. 'Trusted' should be 'trust' to match the present tense context. The preposition 'in' after 'trusted' is unnecessary here. Also, 'talking to your online' is incorrect; it should be 'talking online'. The double 'the' before 'library' is a typographical error.

× As a library, I often read, book or study and chat with my friends.

✓ At the library, I often read books, study, and chat with my friends.

The phrase 'As a library' is incorrect; it should be 'At the library' to indicate location. 'Read, book or study' is incorrect; 'book' should be plural 'books' and the comma usage is wrong. The sentence should list activities properly with correct plural form and conjunctions.

× No, I didn't go to the libraries much when I was a kid because I didn't really enjoy being quiet for a long time. I prefer playing outside or reading book at home where I feel more comfortable.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library much when I was a kid because I didn't really enjoy being quiet for a long time. I preferred playing outside or reading books at home where I felt more comfortable.

'Libraries' should be singular 'library' to refer to the general place. 'Reading book' should be 'reading books' to indicate plural. Also, tense consistency requires 'prefer' to be 'preferred' and 'feel' to be 'felt' to match past tense context.

× Also, the library was quite far from my house so it was not very convenient to visit often.

✓ Also, the library was quite far from my house, so it was not very convenient to visit often.

A comma is needed before 'so' to correctly join two independent clauses. The rest of the sentence is correct.

× I don't know, I'm not very sure about Chinese children as I am from Vietnam.

✓ I don't know; I'm not very sure about Chinese children because I am from Vietnam.

The conjunction 'as' is better replaced with 'because' to express reason clearly in this context. Also, a semicolon or period is better than a comma to separate the two independent clauses.

× However, in my country many kids often go to the library to study and draw book, especially during weekend library, a popular play for student to improve their chronology.

✓ However, in my country many kids often go to the library to study and borrow books, especially during the weekend. The library is a popular place for students to improve their knowledge.

'Draw book' is incorrect; it should be 'borrow books'. 'During weekend library' is incorrect; it should be 'during the weekend'. 'Play' should be 'place'. 'Student' should be plural 'students'. 'Chronology' is incorrect in this context; 'knowledge' is appropriate.