图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lỗi sai như 'it is base on' nên là 'it depends on'. Ngoài ra, bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời với các chi tiết cụ thể hơn và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn như 'books' thay vì 'bills'.

示例: I often go to the library depending on my mood. For instance, when I feel happy, I like to study there and enjoy the peaceful atmosphere. However, if I feel unhappy, I prefer to stay at home.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng không phù hợp như 'laboratory' thay vì 'library', 'literacy book' không đúng nghĩa. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có liên kết logic.

示例: Usually, I go to the library to read books and study quietly. For example, yesterday I borrowed a literature book to prepare for my exam.

建议: Bạn cần sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trả lời có ý nghĩa rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, 'broad' không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này, có thể dùng 'boring' hoặc 'big'. Ngoài ra, câu 'lay down my hair when I feel straight' không rõ nghĩa. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và thêm chi tiết cụ thể.

示例: When I was a kid, I didn't enjoy going to the library because I found it boring. But now, I often visit the library to read books and relax when I feel stressed.

建议: Bạn cần sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trả lời có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn. 'Laboratory' không đúng, nên dùng 'library'. Câu trả lời nên có ý kiến rõ ràng và chi tiết cụ thể hơn về thói quen của trẻ em Trung Quốc.

示例: I think Chinese kids often go to the library, especially on weekends. They enjoy reading different kinds of books, including cooking books, which helps them learn new skills.

× Actually, it is base on my mood.

✓ Actually, it is based on my mood.

The verb 'base' should be in the past participle form 'based' to correctly form the passive voice with 'is'. This is a common error where the base form is used instead of the past participle after 'is'.

× I usually go to the library with my bills to study and enjoy the peaceful atmosphere.

✓ I usually go to the library with my books to study and enjoy the peaceful atmosphere.

The word 'bills' is incorrect in this context; the correct plural noun is 'books' when referring to study materials. This is a vocabulary misuse rather than a strict grammar error but affects meaning and clarity.

× However, when I feel unhappy, I usually at home.

✓ However, when I feel unhappy, I usually stay at home.

The sentence lacks a verb after 'I usually'. The verb 'stay' is needed to complete the sentence structure. Omitting the verb leads to an incomplete sentence.

× I should leave when I go to the laboratory.

✓ I usually leave when I go to the library.

The word 'laboratory' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'library'. Also, 'should leave' is inappropriate in this context; 'usually leave' fits better to express habitual action. This corrects both vocabulary and modal verb usage.

× I use literacy book yesterday with my bills.

✓ I used a literature book yesterday with my books.

The verb 'use' should be in the past tense 'used' to match the time indicator 'yesterday'. Also, 'literacy book' is incorrect; the correct term is 'literature book'. 'Bills' should be 'books' as explained earlier.

× However, I'm going to need to prepare for my exam.

✓ However, I need to prepare for my exam.

The phrase 'I'm going to need to' is awkward and redundant. Simplifying to 'I need to' is clearer and more natural in this context.

× Actually, when I was a kid I didn't enjoy going to the library because I think it was very broad.

✓ Actually, when I was a kid I didn't enjoy going to the library because I thought it was very boring.

The verb 'think' should be in the past tense 'thought' to match the past time frame. Also, 'broad' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is likely 'boring'.

× But now I usually go today to read some book and lay down my hair when I feel straight.

✓ But now I usually go to read some books and relax when I feel stressed.

The phrase 'go today' is redundant with 'now' and 'usually'. 'Some book' should be plural 'some books'. 'Lay down my hair' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'relax'. 'Feel straight' is incorrect; 'feel stressed' fits better.

× Actually, I think they enjoy going to the laboratory because China kids are interesting in study in a cooking book.

✓ Actually, I think they enjoy going to the library because Chinese kids are interested in studying cooking books.

'Laboratory' should be 'library'. 'China kids' should be 'Chinese kids'. 'Interesting' should be 'interested'. 'Study in a cooking book' should be 'studying cooking books'. These correct plural and adjective forms and prepositions.

× So I think they are. So I think they usually go to the library in the weekend and.

✓ So I think they do. I think they usually go to the library on the weekend.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'They are' is unclear; 'they do' is the correct response to the implied question. 'In the weekend' should be 'on the weekend'. The conjunction 'and' at the end is unnecessary and should be removed.