图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors such as 'go to library very rare' (should be 'rarely go to the library'). Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences and focus on clear, direct responses. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: I rarely go to the library because of my busy schedule. However, whenever I have free time, I enjoy going there to read various books and play some games. It helps me relax and learn new things.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and contains filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Try to be more specific and structured. Use linking words to organize your ideas and avoid vague phrases like 'different mystery apart'.

示例: In the library, I usually read novels, especially mystery stories, because I enjoy trying to solve puzzles and uncover secrets. Besides reading, I sometimes play educational games to improve my skills.

建议: Your answer has grammatical errors and repetition, such as 'like like' and 'like to playing'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, avoiding redundancy.

示例: Yes, I used to go to the library often when I was a kid because my school had a large library in the center. I enjoyed reading various books and playing educational games there.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid vague statements like 'I see many times on the Instagram reads'. Instead, express your opinion clearly and use correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy and ensure coherence with linking words.

示例: I'm not completely sure, but from what I've seen on social media, many Chinese kids are interested in libraries. They often visit them regularly to gain knowledge and support their education.

× Well, I go to library very rare due to my hectic schedule, but whenever I get free time I really like to go over there in order to read different kinds of books and playing different kinds of games and so on.

✓ Well, I go to the library very rarely due to my hectic schedule, but whenever I get free time I really like to go over there in order to read different kinds of books and play different kinds of games and so on.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'very rare' should be 'very rarely' to correctly use the adverb form. Additionally, 'playing' should be changed to 'play' to maintain parallel structure with 'read' in the sentence.

× Well, I go to library very rare due to my hectic schedule, but whenever I get free time I really like to go over there in order to read different kinds of books and playing different kinds of games and so on.

✓ Well, I go to the library very rarely due to my hectic schedule, but whenever I get free time I really like to go over there in order to read different kinds of books and play different kinds of games and so on.

'Very rare' is an adjective phrase, but here an adverb is needed to modify the verb 'go'. Therefore, 'very rare' should be changed to 'very rarely'. Also, 'playing' should be 'play' to keep the verb forms consistent.

× Well, I go to library very rare due to my hectic schedule, but whenever I get free time I really like to go over there in order to read different kinds of books and playing different kinds of games and so on.

✓ Well, I go to the library very rarely due to my hectic schedule, but whenever I get free time I really like to go over there in order to read different kinds of books and play different kinds of games and so on.

'Playing' is incorrectly used after 'and' where the base form 'play' is required to maintain parallelism with the verb 'read'.

× Well, there are plenty of things that I prefer to do over there. First of all, I really like to read novels, specifically the mysterious one, uh, as I like the, umm, books that are with different mystery apart.

✓ Well, there are plenty of things that I prefer to do over there. First of all, I really like to read novels, specifically the mysterious ones, uh, as I like books that have different mysteries.

'The mysterious one' should be plural 'the mysterious ones' to agree with 'novels'. Also, 'books that are with different mystery apart' is incorrect; it should be 'books that have different mysteries' to correctly express the idea.

× Well, there are plenty of things that I prefer to do over there. First of all, I really like to read novels, specifically the mysterious one, uh, as I like the, umm, books that are with different mystery apart.

✓ Well, there are plenty of things that I prefer to do over there. First of all, I really like to read novels, specifically the mysterious ones, uh, as I like books that have different mysteries.

'Novels' is plural, so the adjective phrase should be plural as well: 'mysterious ones'. Also, 'mystery' should be plural 'mysteries' to match 'different'.

× Yes, I'd really like to. I really used to go to the library when I was in my school as there is a big library in the center part of my school. I always like like to read different kinds of books over there and like to playing the games.

✓ Yes, I'd really like to. I really used to go to the library when I was in my school as there was a big library in the center part of my school. I always liked to read different kinds of books over there and liked to play the games.

Since the sentence refers to past events, 'is' should be changed to 'was' to reflect past tense. Also, 'like like' is a repetition error and should be 'liked'. 'Like to playing' is incorrect; it should be 'liked to play' to maintain correct verb form and tense.

× Yes, I'd really like to. I really used to go to the library when I was in my school as there is a big library in the center part of my school. I always like like to read different kinds of books over there and like to playing the games.

✓ Yes, I'd really like to. I really used to go to the library when I was in my school as there was a big library in the center part of my school. I always liked to read different kinds of books over there and liked to play the games.

'Like like' is a typographical error and should be corrected to 'liked'. Also, 'like to playing' is incorrect; the verb 'like' should be followed by the base form 'play'.

× Yes, I'd really like to. I really used to go to the library when I was in my school as there is a big library in the center part of my school. I always like like to read different kinds of books over there and like to playing the games.

✓ Yes, I'd really like to. I really used to go to the library when I was in my school as there was a big library in the center part of my school. I always liked to read different kinds of books over there and liked to play the games.

'Playing' is incorrectly used after 'like to'; the correct form is the base verb 'play'.

× Well, I'm not very well informed about this topic, but I see many times on the Instagram reads that they really fascinated with the library.

✓ Well, I'm not very well informed about this topic, but I have seen many times on Instagram reads that they are really fascinated with the library.

'See many times on the Instagram reads' is awkward and incorrect; 'have seen many times on Instagram reads' is better. Also, 'the Instagram' should be 'Instagram' without 'the' because it is a proper noun. 'They really fascinated with' is incorrect; it should be 'they are really fascinated with' to use the correct verb form and preposition.

× Well, I'm not very well informed about this topic, but I see many times on the Instagram reads that they really fascinated with the library.

✓ Well, I'm not very well informed about this topic, but I have seen many times on Instagram reads that they are really fascinated with the library.

'The Instagram' is incorrect because 'Instagram' as a platform name does not require the definite article 'the'.

× Well, I'm not very well informed about this topic, but I see many times on the Instagram reads that they really fascinated with the library.

✓ Well, I'm not very well informed about this topic, but I have seen many times on Instagram reads that they are really fascinated with the library.

'I see many times' is incorrect in this context; the present perfect 'I have seen many times' is appropriate to indicate repeated past observations relevant to the present.

× So they used to go on their daily basis in order to get knowledge from there. So I think real really engage with the education.

✓ So they used to go on a daily basis in order to get knowledge from there. So I think they really engage with education.

'Their daily basis' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a daily basis'. Also, 'real really engage with the education' is ungrammatical; it should be 'they really engage with education' to include the subject pronoun and remove the unnecessary definite article before 'education'.