图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using proper prepositions and sentence structures. Also, avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to connect your points smoothly. For example, you can say: "Yes, I often go to the library because I don't have enough space at home to keep many books. Moreover, the library is very close to my house, which makes it convenient for me to visit frequently."

示例: Yes, I often go to the library because I don't have enough space at home to store many books. Moreover, the library is very close to my house, so it's convenient for me to visit frequently.

建议: Focus on making your sentences grammatically correct and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific details about your preferences. For example, you can say: "I usually go to the library to read books. I enjoy reading science-related books, but I find story books more interesting because they contain amazing and captivating stories."

示例: I usually go to the library to read books. I enjoy reading science-related books, but I find story books more interesting because they contain amazing and captivating stories.

建议: Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct verb tenses. Avoid repeating the same information and use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, you can say: "When I was a kid, I did not go to the library because I found studying boring. Also, I was not a very good student at that time, so I rarely visited the library."

示例: When I was a kid, I did not go to the library because I found studying boring. Also, I was not a very good student at that time, so I rarely visited the library.

建议: Avoid making assumptions and focus on giving a clear and polite answer. Use correct grammar and linking words to express your opinion. For example, you can say: "I am not very sure about whether Chinese kids often go to the library because I am from India. However, I believe that many children in China value education and probably visit libraries regularly."

示例: I am not very sure about whether Chinese kids often go to the library because I am from India. However, I believe that many children in China value education and probably visit libraries regularly.

× Yes, I often go library for reading books because at my home it's not too much space where I store several books.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library to read books because at my home there is not much space to store several books.

The phrase 'go library' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'go to the library'. Also, 'for reading books' should be 'to read books' to express purpose. Additionally, 'not too much space' is better expressed as 'not much space'. The sentence needed prepositions and phrasing corrections to be grammatically correct.

× And advantage is this, the library is very close at my home, so I mostly go library.

✓ The advantage is this: the library is very close to my home, so I mostly go to the library.

The sentence starts with 'And advantage is this' which is awkward; it should be 'The advantage is this'. Also, 'close at my home' should be 'close to my home'. 'Go library' again needs 'go to the library'. The sentence needed corrections in conjunction usage and prepositions.

× Well, I usually go in the library for reading books.

✓ Well, I usually go to the library to read books.

'Go in the library' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go to the library'. Also, 'for reading books' should be 'to read books' to express purpose.

× I like to read a science related books and I also like to read a story books.

✓ I like to read science-related books and I also like to read story books.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before plural nouns 'books'. It should be removed. Also, 'science related' should be hyphenated as 'science-related' when used as an adjective.

× So I think the story books are more interesting rather than any books.

✓ So I think story books are more interesting than any other books.

'More interesting rather than' is incorrect; the correct comparative structure is 'more interesting than'. Also, 'the story books' can be 'story books' for generalization.

× So I mostly go like.

✓ So I mostly go there.

'Go like' is an incomplete and incorrect phrase. The sentence needs an object or place, so 'go there' is appropriate.

× Well, when I was kid I was not going to library because I just think in my childhood study is not good at just boring.

✓ Well, when I was a kid I did not go to the library because I thought studying in my childhood was not good and just boring.

The phrase 'was kid' needs the article 'a'. 'Was not going' should be 'did not go' for past simple tense. 'I just think' should be 'I thought' to match past tense. The sentence structure and verb tenses needed correction.

× It's only giving this address to a person.

✓ It only gives this advice to a person.

'Giving this address' is incorrect in this context; likely the intended word is 'advice'. Also, 'giving' should be 'gives' to match subject-verb agreement.

× So in my childhood I'm not a so good student so I'm not going library.

✓ So in my childhood I was not a very good student so I did not go to the library.

The sentence refers to past time, so present tense 'I'm' and 'I'm not going' are incorrect; they should be past tense 'I was' and 'I did not go'. Also, 'a so good' should be 'a very good'. 'Go library' needs 'go to the library'.

× So I was not going the library.

✓ So I was not going to the library.

The phrase 'going the library' is missing the preposition 'to'. Also, 'was not going' is acceptable but 'did not go' is more natural in this context.

× Well, I don't know about Chinese kid because I'm belong to India, I have a Indian nationality.

✓ Well, I don't know about Chinese kids because I belong to India; I have Indian nationality.

'Chinese kid' should be plural 'Chinese kids' to refer generally. 'I'm belong' is incorrect; correct is 'I belong'. 'A Indian nationality' should be 'Indian nationality' without 'a'.

× So if I talk about Chinese, people are not know about it properly.

✓ So if I talk about Chinese people, I do not know about it properly.

'People are not know' is incorrect; correct is 'I do not know'. Also, 'talk about Chinese' should be 'talk about Chinese people' for clarity.

× But I think yes, because Chinese people is very intelligent that's why I think that.

✓ But I think yes, because Chinese people are very intelligent; that's why I think that.

'Chinese people is' is incorrect; 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'are'.