图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct grammar errors like 'cause all information'.

示例: I don't go to the library often nowadays because I am working. However, when I was a student, I frequently visited the library to complete projects and assignments since it had all the information I needed.

建议: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, avoid repetition and improve grammar, for example, 'do an online researching' should be 'do online research'.

示例: When I go to the library, I usually read books or do online research using the computers available. This helps me find information that I can't get from books alone.

建议: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Use simple, clear sentences and avoid repeating words. Also, ensure your verb tenses are consistent and appropriate.

示例: Yes, I loved going to the library when I was a kid. My school required us to do a lot of research for assignments, so I often visited the library to complete my work.

建议: Your answer is somewhat vague and incomplete. Try to provide more specific reasons and avoid unclear phrases like 'I saw a lot of pictures telling'. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

示例: Yes, I believe Chinese kids often go to the library because they are very dedicated to their studies. They are patient and spend a lot of time researching and reading to complete their school activities.

× Actually, I don't go to the library more often nowadays.

✓ Actually, I don't go to the library very often nowadays.

The phrase 'more often' is comparative and requires a comparison object, which is missing here. The intended meaning is frequency, so 'very often' is more appropriate to express low frequency in the present tense.

× But when I was a student, yes I definitely went to library to do our projects, assignments and activities cause all information.

✓ But when I was a student, yes I definitely went to the library to do our projects, assignments and activities because of all the information.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'cause' is informal and incomplete; it should be 'because of' to correctly introduce the reason.

× What's my routine when I went to the libraries to read books or sometimes do an online researching because our library already got a lot of computers.

✓ My routine when I went to the library was to read books or sometimes do online research because our library already had a lot of computers.

The sentence structure is incorrect; 'What's my routine' is present tense and question form, but the context is past. Also, 'libraries' should be singular 'library' to match the context. 'An online researching' is incorrect; 'online research' is uncountable and does not need an article. 'Got' should be past tense 'had'.

× So if I can't find the things that I need to find in the book on the book.

✓ So if I can't find the things that I need to find in the book.

The phrase 'in the book on the book' is redundant and incorrect. The correct preposition is 'in' for something contained within a book.

× Probably absolutely yes. When I was younger, I definitely love to go to go to the library to to do our assignments and activities and our schools required us to do lots of research when I was a student.

✓ Probably absolutely yes. When I was younger, I definitely loved to go to the library to do our assignments and activities, and our school required us to do lots of research when I was a student.

The verb 'love' should be in past tense 'loved' to match the past time frame. 'Go to go to' and 'to to do' are repetitions and should be corrected. 'Schools' should be singular 'school' to match the subject.

× So I am definitely, I love to.

✓ So I definitely loved to.

The sentence mixes present tense 'am' and 'love' with past context. It should be past tense 'loved' to maintain consistency.

× Chinese people are very keen about getting the information and I saw a lot of pictures telling that Chinese people are very patient regarding their school activities, so they always went to the library to do a lot of research and readings.

✓ Chinese people are very keen about getting information and I saw a lot of pictures showing that Chinese people are very patient regarding their school activities, so they always go to the library to do a lot of research and reading.

The phrase 'getting the information' should be 'getting information' as 'information' is uncountable and does not need 'the' here. 'Telling' is incorrect; 'showing' fits better. 'Went' is past tense but the context suggests habitual action, so present tense 'go' is appropriate. 'Readings' should be 'reading' as an uncountable noun here.