图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不清，如“each time my kids and I, we borrowed about 10 books from the”表达不完整且重复。建议简洁明了地表达借书的次数和数量。

示例: Yes, I usually go to Shanghai Library about once a month with my kids. The library has six floors and a large collection of books. Each time, we borrow around ten books.

建议: 回答结构清晰，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯，如“firstly”和“secondly”。同时，丰富细节会使回答更具体。

示例: Usually, I do two things in the library. Firstly, I return the books we borrowed last time. Secondly, I borrow new books because visiting the library is a family routine.

建议: 回答基本清楚，但时态使用不准确，“don't have”应为过去时“didn't have”。建议注意时态一致性。

示例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I grew up in a rural area of China where there wasn't a library at that time.

建议: 回答中存在语法和表达不自然的问题，如“the ones live in cities, metropolitans such as Shanghai, Beijing or Shenzhen governments”表达混乱。建议简化句子并使用正确的语法。

示例: Yes, Chinese kids, especially those living in big cities like Shanghai, Beijing, and Shenzhen, often go to libraries. The government has made great efforts to build many public libraries, making it convenient for children, including my own kids, to visit them.

× I each time my kids and I, we borrowed about 10 books from the.

✓ Each time, my kids and I borrow about 10 books.

这里的句子结构混乱，'each time' 应该放在句首，且 'borrowed' 应该用一般现在时，因为描述的是习惯动作。此外，'the' 后面缺少名词，应该去掉。

× The second thing is to borrow new ones since going to library is a routine in my family.

✓ The second thing is to borrow new ones since going to the library is a routine in my family.

'go to library' 中缺少定冠词 'the'，正确表达是 'go to the library'。

× We don't have a library by then.

✓ We didn't have a library then.

描述过去的情况，应该用过去时态 'didn't have'，而且 'by then' 用法不当，改为 'then' 更合适。

× Oh yes, especially the ones live in cities, metropolitans such as Shanghai, Beijing or Shenzhen governments.

✓ Oh yes, especially those who live in cities and metropolises such as Shanghai, Beijing, or Shenzhen.

'the ones live' 应改为 'those who live'，'metropolitans' 应为复数名词 'metropolises'，'governments' 不应放在这里。

× Government has made great effort to build a lot of public libraries.

✓ The government has made great efforts to build a lot of public libraries.

'Government' 前应加定冠词 'The'，'effort' 应用复数形式 'efforts'，表示多次努力。

× It's very convenient for kids for current kids to go to library, including my kids.

✓ It's very convenient for kids, including my kids, to go to the library.

'go to library' 缺少定冠词 'the'，且句子结构需要调整，使表达更清晰。