图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more natural. For example, use 'I study there' instead of 'I studied there' to indicate habitual action, and say 'I find it a very peaceful place' to improve fluency. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating 'study' twice.

示例: Yes, I often go to the library because I study there, and I find it a very peaceful place to concentrate on my work.

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Instead of 'do my study', say 'study'. Also, avoid repeating 'in the library' multiple times. Use linking words like 'and' or 'also' properly to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: I usually study in the library, work on my laptop, and sometimes spend time with my friends there.

建议: Your answer is a bit confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Instead of 'I did not remember the time exactly', say 'I don't remember exactly'. Also, avoid double negatives like 'I did not go' followed by 'but still now I go'. Try to make your answer clearer and more concise.

示例: I don't remember exactly, but I didn't go to the library much as a child. However, I go there regularly now for my studies.

建议: Your answer lacks specific details and has grammatical errors. Instead of 'children's of China', say 'Chinese children'. Also, relying on TV series as evidence is weak; try to give more general or personal observations. Use linking words to improve coherence.

示例: Yes, Chinese children often go to the library because many schools encourage reading, and libraries provide a quiet place for them to study and do homework.

× I studied there and I found it very peaceful place for me to concentrate on my study.

✓ I studied there and I found it a very peaceful place for me to concentrate on my study.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before the adjective 'very peaceful place'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. Adding 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I usually do my study in the library and I also do my work in my on my laptop in the library and I also spend time with my friends.

✓ I usually study in the library and I also do my work on my laptop in the library and I also spend time with my friends.

The phrase 'do my study' is incorrect; 'study' is usually used as a verb, so 'I usually study' is better. Also, 'in my on my laptop' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on my laptop'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Well, I did not remember the time exactly, but yes, I did not go to the library when I was a child, but still now I go to the library for my studies.

✓ Well, I do not remember the time exactly, but yes, I did not go to the library when I was a child, but even now I go to the library for my studies.

The verb 'remember' in this context should be in the present tense 'do not remember' because the speaker is currently unable to recall the time. Also, 'still now' is awkward; 'even now' is a better phrase to express the ongoing action.

× Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because I see numerous series on my mobile phone in which children's of China go to the library for their studies.

✓ Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because I see numerous series on my mobile phone in which children of China go to the library for their studies.

The phrase 'children's of China' is incorrect. 'Children' is already plural and does not need a possessive form here. Removing the apostrophe and 's' makes the phrase grammatically correct.