图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: In English (Cambodia), try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. For example, say "I often go to the library about five times a week with my cousin who lives with me. I like it because it provides a wide range of books and documents, which makes it easy for me to do research."

示例: I often go to the library about five times a week with my cousin who lives with me. I like it because it provides a wide range of books and documents, which makes it easy for me to do research.

建议: In English (Cambodia), improve your answer by using correct grammar and linking words. For example, say "I usually find some books and documents, and I also do research there because the library has fast internet."

示例: I usually find some books and documents, and I also do research there because the library has fast internet.

建议: In English (Cambodia), try to use past tense correctly and make your answer more coherent. For example, say "Yes, I did, but not often because when I was a kid, I lived in the countryside where there were not many libraries. So, I studied and did research at home. However, after moving to the city, I started going to the library more often."

示例: Yes, I did, but not often because when I was a kid, I lived in the countryside where there were not many libraries. So, I studied and did research at home. However, after moving to the city, I started going to the library more often.

建议: In English (Cambodia), improve your answer by using more precise vocabulary and clearer explanations. For example, say "Yes, they do. From what I have seen on the internet, Chinese kids like to study and often go to the library to read many books because the library has a lot of resources."

示例: Yes, they do. From what I have seen on the internet, Chinese kids like to study and often go to the library to read many books because the library has a lot of resources.

× Yes, I often go to library about 5 * a week with my cousin who live together with me in the room.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library about 5 times a week with my cousin who lives together with me in the room.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, '5 * a week' is unclear and should be '5 times a week' to express frequency correctly. Additionally, 'cousin who live' should be 'cousin who lives' to agree with the singular subject.

× Yes, I often go to library about 5 * a week with my cousin who live together with me in the room.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library about 5 times a week with my cousin who lives together with me in the room.

The verb 'live' must agree with the singular subject 'cousin', so it should be 'lives'.

× And I often go there because like it provide me a wide range of books and documents so it makes me easy to do a research.

✓ And I often go there because I like it; it provides me with a wide range of books and documents, so it makes it easy for me to do research.

The pronoun 'it' is used incorrectly after 'like'; 'I like it' is correct. Also, 'provide' should be 'provides' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The phrase 'makes me easy' is incorrect; it should be 'makes it easy for me'. 'Do a research' is incorrect; 'do research' is uncountable and does not need 'a'.

× I usually find some books and document and also I do some research there because usually every Internet there and it provide a faster Internet also.

✓ I usually find some books and documents and also do some research there because usually there is Internet, and it provides faster Internet as well.

The word 'document' should be plural 'documents' to match 'some books'. 'Every Internet' is incorrect; 'there is Internet' is correct. 'Provide' should be 'provides' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× I usually find some books and document and also I do some research there because usually every Internet there and it provide a faster Internet also.

✓ I usually find some books and documents and also do some research there because usually there is Internet, and it provides faster Internet as well.

The phrase 'every Internet there' is incorrect; the correct structure is 'there is Internet' to indicate existence.

× Yeah I did, but not too often because like when I was a kid, I live in a countryside so it doesn't have too many library in my area so I just study and do research at home and stuff.

✓ Yeah, I did, but not too often because when I was a kid, I lived in the countryside, so there weren't too many libraries in my area, so I just studied and did research at home and stuff.

The verbs 'live', 'doesn't have', 'study', and 'do' should be in past tense 'lived', 'didn't have', 'studied', and 'did' to match the past time frame. 'A countryside' is incorrect; 'the countryside' is correct. 'Library' should be plural 'libraries' because of 'too many'.

× Yeah I did, but not too often because like when I was a kid, I live in a countryside so it doesn't have too many library in my area so I just study and do research at home and stuff.

✓ Yeah, I did, but not too often because when I was a kid, I lived in the countryside, so there weren't too many libraries in my area, so I just studied and did research at home and stuff.

The phrase 'a countryside' is incorrect; 'countryside' is an uncountable noun and should be preceded by 'the'. Also, 'too many library' should be 'too many libraries'.

× But while I live in the city I go more often.

✓ But while I lived in the city, I went more often.

The sentence refers to a past time frame, so the verbs 'live' and 'go' should be in past tense 'lived' and 'went'.

× Yes, they do. As I see in the Internet, Chinese kids like to study. They love to go to the library to read more book because there are a lot of results there.

✓ Yes, they do. As I see on the Internet, Chinese kids like to study. They love to go to the library to read more books because there are a lot of resources there.

'More book' should be plural 'more books'. 'Results' is not the correct word here; 'resources' or 'materials' is more appropriate. Also, 'in the Internet' should be 'on the Internet'.

× As I see in the Internet, Chinese kids like to study.

✓ As I see on the Internet, Chinese kids like to study.

The correct preposition with 'Internet' is 'on', not 'in'.