图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答有些重复且句子结构不够清晰，建议简化表达，避免冗余，并且注意句子完整性。可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Yes, I often go to the university library because it is quiet and comfortable. Moreover, it is conveniently located near our classroom building, which makes it easy for me to access.

建议: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: I usually write papers and prepare PowerPoint presentations in the library because it is a quiet place where people focus on their own work without talking.

建议: 回答中时态使用不准确，句子结构较复杂且有语法错误，建议注意时态一致性并简化句子。

示例: Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid. In junior high school, my classmates and I often visited the library to find information for our science festival presentations.

建议: 回答中表达不够流畅，句子结构混乱，建议使用更简洁的句子并注意逻辑连接。

示例: In my opinion, Chinese kids do not often go to the library because many of them attend extra classes after school and on weekends. Besides, the library in our city is quite far from their homes.

× Yes, I always go to the library in my university because the library is very quiet and the table is comfortable and the city is comfortable and the library is near to our class building and near to our.

✓ Yes, I always go to the library in my university because the library is very quiet, the tables are comfortable, the city is comfortable, and the library is near our class building and near us.

此句中“the table is comfortable”应改为复数形式“the tables are comfortable”，因为图书馆通常有多张桌子，且描述的是一般情况，需用复数。

× the library is near to our class building and near to our.

✓ the library is near our class building and near us.

“near”作为介词时后面直接接名词，不需要“to”，所以应去掉“to”。

× I always do some practice like write some papers and do some PPT in the library because library we can't talk to each other and we can just do our own jobs like reading books or making paper.

✓ I always do some practice like writing some papers and making some PPTs in the library because in the library we can't talk to each other and we can just do our own jobs like reading books or making papers.

“write some papers”应改为动名词形式“writing some papers”，且“PPT”应复数形式“PPTs”，表示多份演示文稿。

× because library we can't talk to each other and we can just do our own jobs like reading books or making paper.

✓ because in the library we can't talk to each other and we can just do our own jobs like reading books or making papers.

缺少介词“in”来说明地点，应为“in the library”。

× Yes, I also go to a library when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I also went to a library when I was a kid.

“a library”是单数，使用正确，但动词时态应与过去时间状语“when I was a kid”一致，故“go”应改为过去式“went”。

× When I study in junior high, we have some school work have to do about our scientific festival, so my classmates and I have to go to library to search some information we need for our presentation.

✓ When I studied in junior high, we had some schoolwork to do about our science festival, so my classmates and I had to go to the library to search for some information we needed for our presentation.

句中描述过去的事情，动词时态应为过去式，如“study”改为“studied”，“have”改为“had”，“have to go”改为“had to go”，“need”改为“needed”。

× have to go to library to search some information we need for our presentation.

✓ had to go to the library to search for some information we needed for our presentation.

“library”前应加定冠词“the”，且“search”后应加介词“for”，构成短语“search for information”。

× From my point of view, I think Chinese kids don't often go to a library because lots of Chinese kids have to go to after class, after class courses, resources in their weekends, and the library in our city is very far from our home.

✓ From my point of view, I think Chinese kids don't often go to libraries because lots of Chinese kids have to go to after-class courses and other activities on weekends, and the library in our city is very far from our home.

“a library”应改为复数“libraries”，表示泛指多个图书馆；“after class, after class courses, resources”表达混乱，应简化为“after-class courses and other activities”。