图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'just reading' and improve grammar by using correct verb forms. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: No, I don't go to the library often because I prefer buying books and reading at home or relaxing in the park while reading on the grass.

建议: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar correction. Use linking words like 'and' or 'because' properly to connect ideas. Also, avoid awkward phrases like 'it give it keeps me'. Try to be more specific about what you do in the library.

示例: Usually, I browse the shelves to find new books to read, and I also study there because the quiet environment helps me stay focused and motivated.

建议: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a direct response first, then explain with supporting details. Avoid hesitations and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically.

示例: I don't remember going to the library when I was a kid, probably because I was too young. If I did, it was not often or memorable.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Avoid filler words like 'like' and repeated words such as 'high high'. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific in your explanation.

示例: I'm not sure how often Chinese kids go to the library, but due to the strong emphasis on education in China, they probably visit libraries frequently to study and read.

× No, I don't go often to the library.

✓ No, I don't often go to the library.

The adverb 'often' should be placed before the main verb 'go' to follow correct English adverb placement rules.

× I prefer buying books and just reading in my house or going to the park or something like that and just sits on the grass and just reading.

✓ I prefer buying books and just reading in my house or going to the park or something like that and just sitting on the grass and just reading.

After 'and', the verb should be in the -ing form to maintain parallel structure. 'Sits' is incorrect here; it should be 'sitting' to match the other gerunds.

× Also I can study there because I have the peace and also it give it keeps me more motivated to study outdoors.

✓ Also I can study there because I have the peace and also it gives me more motivation to study outdoors.

'It give' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; the verb should be 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'keeps me more motivated' is awkward; 'gives me more motivation' is clearer.

× I think I wasn't going to the library when I was a kid, or if I do, I don't remember that.

✓ I think I didn't go to the library when I was a kid, or if I did, I don't remember that.

The past tense of 'do' is 'did', and the negative past form is 'didn't go' instead of 'wasn't going'. Also, 'if I do' should be 'if I did' to match past tense context.

× So yes, because I probably was too young to remember that. And yeah, but I think I.

✓ So yes, because I was probably too young to remember that. And yeah, but I think I don't remember clearly.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. Adding 'don't remember clearly' completes the thought and improves sentence structure.

× I'm not sure if Chinese kids go often to the library, but I think because of like a high high education in China so maybe they often go to the library to study or treat.

✓ I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library, but I think because of the high level of education in China, maybe they often go to the library to study or read.

The phrase 'go often to the library' should be 'often go to the library' for correct adverb placement. 'Because of like a high high education' is awkward; 'because of the high level of education' is correct. 'Treat' is likely a typo for 'read'.