图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'still' and 'study and learn'. Also, use plural forms correctly ('online platforms'). Try to combine ideas smoothly and use linking words to improve coherence.

示例: Yes, I often go to the library to study because I prefer learning from physical books rather than online platforms, which most people use nowadays.

建议: Your answer has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use consistent verb tenses ('visit' instead of 'visited') and avoid vague expressions like 'random books'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: When I study in the library, I usually look for books and resources that can help me with my courses. Sometimes, I also visit just to read interesting books for leisure.

建议: Your answer is good but can be improved by using past tense consistently and providing more specific details. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'other books that are available'. Use linking words to connect ideas.

示例: Yes, I often went to the library as a child because I loved reading picture books. Although I didn't read many academic books, the library had a variety of storybooks that I enjoyed.

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete. Avoid repeating 'often' and complete your sentences fully. Also, clarify your ideas and use linking words to improve coherence.

示例: Yes, many Chinese kids frequently visit the library because their parents and peers encourage them to study hard and achieve good academic results.

× Nowadays most of the people study and learn through online platform.

✓ Nowadays most people study and learn through online platforms.

The phrase 'most of the people' is better expressed as 'most people' when referring to people in general. Also, 'online platform' should be plural 'online platforms' because there are many such platforms. The preposition 'through' is correctly used here.

× But I'm still an old fashioned person and still want to study and learn through physical.

✓ But I'm still an old-fashioned person and still want to study and learn through physical books.

The adjective 'old fashioned' should be hyphenated as 'old-fashioned' when used before a noun. The phrase 'through physical' is incomplete; it needs a noun such as 'books' to clarify the meaning.

× Sometimes I just visited the library also to read some random books.

✓ Sometimes I just visit the library also to read some random books.

The sentence is describing a habitual action, so the present tense 'visit' should be used instead of the past tense 'visited'.

× I can still remember when I was a kid, I often visited the library because I love to read books with pictures.

✓ I can still remember when I was a kid; I often visited the library because I loved to read books with pictures.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the action happened in the past, 'love' should be changed to 'loved'. Also, a semicolon or period is better than a comma to separate the two independent clauses.

× I don't usually read academic books, but there are other books that are available in our library.

✓ I don't usually read academic books, but there are other books available in our library.

The phrase 'that are available' is wordy; 'available' alone suffices. The pronoun usage is correct, but the sentence can be more concise by removing 'that are'.

× With the peer pressure and parents who are pushing them to excel academically, they often go to the library and study for a lot of.

✓ With the peer pressure and parents who are pushing them to excel academically, they often go to the library and study a lot.

The phrase 'study for a lot of' is incomplete and incorrect. The correct phrase is 'study a lot' to indicate frequent or intense studying.