图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be improved by correcting minor grammatical errors and making the response more concise. For example, say "I used to go to the library very often when I was a student because I could access various reference books and use the facilities to help with my studies. However, I seldom go now as there is no library in my neighbourhood." This version is more natural and effective.

示例: I used to go to the library very often when I was a student because I could access various reference books and use the facilities to help with my studies. However, I seldom go now as there is no library in my neighbourhood.

建议: Your answer is relevant and informative, but it would be better to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating 'usually' twice. For example, "I usually read books or use the computers in the library to help me finish my homework. Moreover, the computers are equipped with special programs, such as the statistics software SPSS, which I often use."

示例: I usually read books or use the computers in the library to help me finish my homework. Moreover, the computers are equipped with special programs, such as the statistics software SPSS, which I often use.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and could be more concise. Use past tense consistently and add linking words for coherence. For example, "Yes, definitely. The library was one of the places I visited most often as a child. My sister used to take me there because she wanted to spend time with me, and I enjoyed reading children's literature as well as detective books."

示例: Yes, definitely. The library was one of the places I visited most often as a child. My sister used to take me there because she wanted to spend time with me, and I enjoyed reading children's literature as well as detective books.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and could be more precise. For example, say "Yes, I think Chinese children often go to the library because their parents place a high value on academic achievement. Therefore, children are frequently taken to the library to study or read Chinese literature to improve their language skills."

示例: Yes, I think Chinese children often go to the library because their parents place a high value on academic achievement. Therefore, children are frequently taken to the library to study or read Chinese literature to improve their language skills.

× I used to go to library very often when I was a student because I could get different reference books and use the facilities in the library to help my study.

✓ I used to go to the library very often when I was a student because I could get different reference books and use the facilities in the library to help my study.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific library. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× Library was one of the most frequent places that I go when I was a kid.

✓ The library was one of the most frequent places that I went to when I was a kid.

The noun 'library' needs the definite article 'the' to specify the place. Also, the verb tense should be past tense 'went' to match 'when I was a kid'. Additionally, the phrase 'places that I go' should be 'places that I went to' to be grammatically correct and idiomatic.

× My sister used to bring me to library because she wanted to spend time with me and I can read a lot of children literature as well as detective books.

✓ My sister used to bring me to the library because she wanted to spend time with me and I could read a lot of children's literature as well as detective books.

Again, 'library' requires the definite article 'the' as it refers to a specific place. Also, 'children literature' should be 'children's literature' to show possession. The modal verb 'can' should be changed to 'could' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Yes, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because Chinese parents usually values academic results very high.

✓ Yes, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because Chinese parents usually value academic results very highly.

The verb 'values' should be 'value' to agree with the plural subject 'parents'. Also, 'very high' should be 'very highly' as it modifies the verb 'value' and requires an adverb form.