图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Avoid irrelevant or confusing details like 'when I was in jail'. Also, ensure correct grammar and article usage, e.g., 'a library' instead of 'an library'. Keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

示例: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a student because I needed to study. However, now as a working professional, I rarely find time to visit the library. But I still enjoy reading books whenever I get the chance.

建议: Your answer is repetitive and lacks fluency. Try to avoid repeating words unnecessarily. Also, use correct prepositions and articles, for example, 'go to the library' and 'get access'. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

示例: When I go to the library, the first thing I do is get permission at the reception. Then, I head to the section where books related to my subjects are kept, pick the books I need, and spend time reading them.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Use correct tenses and sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy like 'these will be these will help'. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

示例: Yes, I loved going to the library as a child because it had many comic and inspirational books. These books helped me gain knowledge and improve my communication skills.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and repetitions. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and repeated words. Also, avoid making unsupported generalisations. Provide clear, concise, and relevant information with linking words.

示例: Yes, many Chinese children often visit libraries because they value education highly. I read an article that highlighted how reading is an important part of their daily routine.

× Yes, I often go to library when I was in jail because I was grown up.

✓ Yes, I often went to the library when I was in jail because I was grown up.

The sentence has an article error and a tense issue. 'Library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match 'when I was in jail'.

× Now I'm a working professional.

✓ Now I'm a working professional.

No correction needed here as the sentence is grammatically correct in present tense to describe current status.

× Currently I don't have enough time to go to libraries.

✓ Currently, I don't have enough time to go to the libraries.

When referring to specific libraries known to the speaker and listener, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'libraries'.

× But in addition to that, I used to go to library when I was a kid because we used to have an library.

✓ But in addition to that, I used to go to the library when I was a kid because we used to have a library.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'an library' is incorrect because 'library' starts with a consonant sound, so 'a library' is correct.

× In my school itself, there will be a number of comic and.

✓ In my school itself, there were a number of comics and books.

The sentence is incomplete and uses 'will be' incorrectly for past context. 'There were' is correct for past tense. Also, 'comic' should be plural 'comics' and the sentence needs completion for clarity.

× I when I when I want to go to library first, first thing I do is that I go to reception to get an access to sit inside the library.

✓ When I want to go to the library, the first thing I do is go to the reception to get access to sit inside the library.

The sentence has repetition and article errors. 'When I when I' is redundant. 'Library' needs 'the'. 'An access' is incorrect; 'access' is uncountable and does not need an article.

× After when I got access I just go to the sessions where my books were placed related to my subjects and then I get those books and read.

✓ After I got access, I just went to the sections where my books related to my subjects were placed, then I got those books and read them.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Go' and 'get' should be in past tense 'went' and 'got' to match 'got access'. 'Sessions' should be 'sections'. Also, 'read' is correct in past tense but adding 'them' clarifies the object.

× Yes, it's a interesting question for me because when I was a child, I'm more fascinated to go to library because there will be some kind of comic books and also some inspirational books these.

✓ Yes, it's an interesting question for me because when I was a child, I was more fascinated to go to the library because there were some kinds of comic books and also some inspirational books.

'A interesting' should be 'an interesting' because 'interesting' starts with a vowel sound. 'I'm more fascinated' should be past tense 'I was more fascinated' to match 'when I was a child'. 'Go to library' needs 'the'. 'There will be' should be 'there were' for past tense. 'Some kind of' should be plural 'some kinds of'.

× So these will be these will help me to gain some information and get a more communication skills because as a child I have a great.

✓ So these helped me to gain some information and improve my communication skills because as a child I had great interest.

The sentence is repetitive and incomplete. 'Will be' should be past tense 'helped' to match past context. 'Get a more communication skills' is incorrect; 'improve my communication skills' is better. 'I have a great' is incomplete; adding 'interest' completes the thought.

× Yes, basically among among the countries, China is a, uh, China is having the most, uh, intelligent students and kids because this, uh, the way they spend their time is on reading books and going to libraries because, uh, how I came to know is that by reading an article.

✓ Yes, basically among the countries, China has the most intelligent students and kids because the way they spend their time is reading books and going to libraries. How I came to know this is by reading an article.

The sentence has repetition 'among among' and article misuse. 'China is having' is incorrect; 'China has' is correct. 'The most intelligent students and kids' is correct. 'The way they spend their time is on reading' should be 'is reading'. The last part is restructured for clarity and grammar.