图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有重复。建议简化句子，使用更准确的表达，并避免冗余。

示例: I don't often go to the library, but I usually go there to study when I have important exams. At home, I get distracted by my phone, so the library helps me focus better.

建议: 回答内容较为重复且表达不够流畅。建议直接回答问题，使用连贯的句子，并丰富细节，使内容更具体。

示例: When I go to the library, I usually study finance, my major. I use my iPad to access online courses and review important materials to prepare for exams.

建议: 语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，清楚表达过去的习惯，并避免拼写错误。

示例: When I was a child, I rarely went to the library because my mother thought it was a bit dangerous to go out alone. However, when I was in junior school, I started going there more often.

建议: 回答不完整且表达不够正式。建议完整表达观点，使用更正式的词汇，并提供具体原因。

示例: Yes, many Chinese students often go to the library because they find it difficult to concentrate at home due to distractions like their phones.

× but if I should prepare to the test like the final exam, I will go to the library for study cause the if I at home or at the apartment, I may be to play the phone or to do.

✓ but if I need to prepare for a test like the final exam, I will go to the library to study because if I am at home or at the apartment, I may play on the phone or do other things.

这里“should prepare”用法不当，应该用“need to prepare”表示需要准备。"cause"应改为“because”表示原因。"may be to play the phone or to do"结构不正确，应改为“may play on the phone or do other things”。此外，缺少动词“am”在“if I at home”中。

× I will go to the library for study cause the if I at home or at the apartment, I may be to play the phone or to do.

✓ I will go to the library to study because if I am at home or at the apartment, I may play on the phone or do other things.

“for study”应改为“to study”，因为“to study”是动词不定式，表示目的。

× I usually learn the knowledge about my major which is finance and I will use my iPad and look the course from the web.

✓ I usually learn about my major, which is finance, and I use my iPad to look at the courses on the web.

“look the course”结构不正确，应为“look at the courses”。“will use”改为“use”更符合习惯表达。

× When I was a kid, I seldom go to the library.

✓ When I was a kid, I seldom went to the library.

句子描述过去的情况，动词应使用过去式，“go”应改为“went”。

× Cousins, my mom dislike me to go out with the adults.

✓ My mom dislikes me going out with the adults, and my cousins too.

“Cousins,”位置不当且句子结构混乱，应调整顺序。动词“dislike”应加第三人称单数“dislikes”。“me to go out”应改为“me going out”更自然。

× She think it's a little danger.

✓ She thinks it's a little dangerous.

主语是第三人称单数，动词应加-s，故“think”改为“thinks”。“danger”是名词，形容词应为“dangerous”。

× But when I'm about Junior School students, I often go to it.

✓ But when I was about a junior school student, I often went to it.

描述过去情况，动词应使用过去式，“I'm”改为“I was”，“go”改为“went”。“Junior School students”应改为“a junior school student”以符合单数形式。

× Yeah, I think the Chinese students always go to the library because most of the students think that they can't study very well at home 'cause they will be attracted by their phone and.

✓ Yeah, I think Chinese students always go to the library because most of them think they can't study very well at home since they will be distracted by their phones.

“the Chinese students”改为“Chinese students”更自然。"'cause"应改为“since”或“because”。“attracted by their phone”应改为“distracted by their phones”，且“phone”应为复数形式。句尾不完整，应去掉“and”。