图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific reasons or examples. Also, avoid grammatical errors like 'That's depend' and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I often go to the library when I am at school because it has a large collection of books and a quiet environment where I can study effectively. However, when I am at home, I rarely visit the library.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Also, avoid grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences.

示例: In the library, I usually read books that I don't have at home because it helps me gain new information. Moreover, the quiet atmosphere allows me to concentrate better on my studies.

建议: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors like 'used to' and awkward phrasing. Try to use past tense correctly and add linking words to improve coherence.

示例: Honestly, I did not often go to the library when I was a kid. Instead, I preferred going to the park where I could play with my friends and enjoy my free time.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and repetitive. Avoid repeating phrases like 'I often see' and finish your sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples or reasons.

示例: From what I have seen on social media and news, Chinese kids often visit libraries because they are encouraged to engage in creative activities and develop their knowledge.

× That's depend on the situation.

✓ That depends on the situation.

The modal verb 'does' is missing for the third person singular subject 'That'. The correct form is 'That depends' to agree with the subject.

× in our school we had very big library where we can spend our free time.

✓ in our school we have a very big library where we can spend our free time.

The sentence refers to a current situation, so present tense 'have' should be used instead of past tense 'had'. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'very big library'.

× So yes. But when I am home, I.

✓ So yes. But when I am home, I do not often go to the library.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb and object. Completing the sentence clarifies the meaning.

× When I am in library, I usually prefer to read a book that I don't have at my home.

✓ When I am in the library, I usually prefer to read a book that I don't have at home.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library'. Also, 'at home' is the correct prepositional phrase, not 'at my home'.

× So reading the book which I want to get information and try to be more calm on the library and to focus on the study is.

✓ So, I read books to get information, try to be calm in the library, and focus on my studies.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Rewriting it with proper sentence structure improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I don't usually used to go to library when I was a kid.

✓ I didn't usually use to go to the library when I was a kid.

The phrase 'used to' is incorrectly combined with 'don't'. The correct negative form is 'didn't use to'. Also, 'the library' requires the definite article.

× Rather than going to a library, I prefer to go to the park because in park I used to play with my friend and spend my time over there.

✓ Rather than going to the library, I preferred to go to the park because in the park I used to play with my friends and spend my time there.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' and 'park'. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context. 'Over there' can be simplified to 'there'.

× I often see that Chinese kids are more interested to involve in a creative things and they often go to library as I have seen that on social media but I.

✓ I often see that Chinese kids are more interested in involving in creative things and they often go to the library as I have seen on social media, but I...

The phrase 'a creative things' is incorrect; 'creative things' is uncountable and does not need 'a'. The preposition 'interested in' is correct, and 'involving in' fits better than 'to involve in'. Also, 'the library' needs the definite article.