图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「Yes I have」は不適切で、「Yes, I do」が正しいです。また、「my room is like messy so I can't focus on study」は「My room is messy, so I can't focus on studying」のように自然な表現に直す必要があります。さらに、文をつなぐ接続詞を使い、より流暢に話す練習をしましょう。

示例: Yes, I often go to the library because my room is usually messy, so I find it hard to concentrate when I study there.

建议: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多いです。例えば、「like you do my homework of my college」は不明瞭で、「I usually do my college homework」のように簡潔に表現しましょう。また、「architect」は「architecture」が正しい名詞形です。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、内容を明確に伝える練習をしましょう。

示例: I usually do my college homework and read books about architecture because I am interested in it, but I don't have many books at home.

建议: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。例えば、「I was lived in close place from library」は「I lived close to the library」が正しい表現です。また、「it was only like 5 minutes to take」は「it was only about a 5-minute walk」のように自然に言い換えましょう。文を整理し、接続詞を使って論理的に話す練習が必要です。

示例: Yes, I went to the library a lot because I lived close to it, only about a five-minute walk, and I loved reading many different kinds of books.

建议: 回答が曖昧で、文法や表現の誤りが多いです。「Chinese paper is more, has more higher level of academic studying skills」は意味が不明瞭で、適切な表現に直す必要があります。また、質問に対して自信を持って答える練習をしましょう。

示例: I'm not sure because I'm Japanese, but I think many Chinese children often go to the library because they value academic study highly.

× I like to go to library to study because my room is like messy so I can't focus on study so I prefer this.

✓ I like to go to the library to study because my room is messy, so I can't focus on studying, so I prefer this.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library', the definite article 'the' is usually required. Also, 'focus on study' should be 'focus on studying' because 'focus on' is followed by a gerund (verb + -ing).

× I like to go to library to study because my room is like messy so I can't focus on study so I prefer this.

✓ I like to go to the library to study because my room is messy, so I can't focus on studying, so I prefer this.

After the phrase 'focus on', the verb should be in the gerund form (-ing). Therefore, 'focus on study' should be corrected to 'focus on studying'. This is a common grammatical structure in English.

× I usually study like you do my homework of my college and I read some books about architect because I like architect because I don't have that many books.

✓ I usually study, like doing my college homework, and I read some books about architecture because I like architecture, but I don't have that many books.

The phrase 'like you do my homework' is awkward and incorrect. It should be 'like doing my college homework' to correctly use the gerund form after 'like'. Also, 'architect' should be 'architecture' when referring to the subject or field of study.

× I usually study like you do my homework of my college and I read some books about architect because I like architect because I don't have that many books.

✓ I usually study, like doing my college homework, and I read some books about architecture because I like architecture, but I don't have that many books.

The phrase 'homework of my college' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'college homework' or 'homework for my college'. Also, 'books about architect' should be 'books about architecture' because 'architecture' is the correct noun for the subject.

× Yes, a lot because I was lived in close place from library and it was only like 5 minutes to take and there's so many type of books and I love books.

✓ Yes, a lot because I lived close to the library and it was only about 5 minutes to get there, and there were so many types of books, and I loved books.

The phrase 'I was lived' is incorrect; the correct past tense is 'I lived'. Also, 'in close place from library' should be 'close to the library'. 'It was only like 5 minutes to take' is awkward; better is 'it was only about 5 minutes to get there'. 'There's so many type of books' should be 'there were so many types of books' to match past tense and plural form.

× Yes, a lot because I was lived in close place from library and it was only like 5 minutes to take and there's so many type of books and I love books.

✓ Yes, a lot because I lived close to the library and it was only about 5 minutes to get there, and there were so many types of books, and I loved books.

The phrase 'so many type of books' is incorrect because 'type' should be plural 'types' to agree with 'many'. Also, 'there's' (there is) should be 'there were' to agree with plural 'types' and past tense.

× Yes, a lot because I was lived in close place from library and it was only like 5 minutes to take and there's so many type of books and I love books.

✓ Yes, a lot because I lived close to the library and it was only about 5 minutes to get there, and there were so many types of books, and I loved books.

The phrase 'in close place from library' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'close to the library'. Also, 'to take' is not appropriate here; 'to get there' or 'to walk there' is better.

× Uh, I don't know because I'm not Chinese and I'm Japanese, but maybe I think yes, because Chinese paper is more, has more higher level of academic studying skills. So I think.

✓ Uh, I don't know because I'm not Chinese and I'm Japanese, but maybe I think yes, because Chinese students have a higher level of academic skills. So I think so.

The phrase 'Chinese paper is more, has more higher level of academic studying skills' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'Chinese students have a higher level of academic skills'. Also, 'has more higher' is redundant; 'higher' alone suffices.