图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現が見られます。例えば、「I'm a high university student」は不自然で、「I am a university student in my final year」などの表現が適切です。また、「it's quite under a large amount of resources to study」は意味が不明瞭なので、より明確に表現しましょう。

示例: Yes, I often go to the library because I am a final-year university student. My university has a large and beautiful library, which provides a wide range of resources that help me study effectively.

建议: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りやつなぎ言葉の不足があります。例えば、「these days I'm doing research for graduate」は不自然で、「these days, I am doing research for my graduate studies」などが適切です。また、文をつなぐために接続詞を使うとより自然になります。

示例: I usually focus on my studies in the library. These days, I am doing research for my graduate studies, so I spend most of my time reading books and writing essays related to my research.

建议: 回答は内容が伝わりますが、文法の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭な部分があります。例えば、「I rather sing activities more important」は意味不明です。より明確で正しい文法を使い、接続詞を用いて論理的に話しましょう。

示例: Unfortunately, I didn't often go to the library when I was a kid. I spent most of my time outside playing soccer or hanging out with my friends because I was not interested in reading books or studying at the library. I preferred outdoor activities instead.

建议: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。例えば、「I'm not sure all about Chinese kids」は不自然で、「I'm not sure about all Chinese kids」が適切です。また、「most of parents」は「most parents」が正しいです。接続詞を使い、文を整理しましょう。

示例: I'm not sure about all Chinese kids, but I guess many of them often go to the library. In China, higher education is highly valued, and most parents encourage their children to study and visit the library regularly.

× Yeah, I quite often go to library 'cause I'm a high university student and my university has a large and beautiful library and I found it's very good place to work or study because it's quite under a large amount of resources to study.

✓ Yeah, I quite often go to the library 'cause I'm a high university student and my university has a large and beautiful library and I found it's a very good place to work or study because it has quite a large amount of resources to study.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'a very good place' needs the indefinite article 'a' before 'very good place'. The phrase 'it's quite under a large amount of resources' is incorrect; it should be 'it has quite a large amount of resources' to correctly express possession.

× I usually focus on my study in library these days I'm doing research for graduate so I spend most time reading books and writing essays for the research.

✓ I usually focus on my study in the library these days. I'm doing research for graduate studies, so I spend most of my time reading books and writing essays for the research.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'most time' should be 'most of my time' to correctly express the amount of time spent. Additionally, 'research for graduate' is incomplete; it should be 'research for graduate studies' or 'graduate research'.

× Unfortunately, I didn't often go to library. I spend most of my time outside playing soccer or hanging out with my friend. I was not interested in reading books, boring books or studying working in library and I rather sing activities more important.

✓ Unfortunately, I didn't often go to the library. I spent most of my time outside playing soccer or hanging out with my friends. I was not interested in reading books, boring books, or studying and working in the library, and I rather saw activities as more important.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library'. 'Spend' should be in past tense 'spent' to match the past context. 'My friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match the context. The phrase 'studying working in library' is awkward and should be 'studying and working in the library'. 'I rather sing activities more important' is incorrect; it should be 'I rather saw activities as more important' to express preference.

× I'm not sure all about Chinese kids, but I guess the Chinese kids often go to library because in China the higher education is highly evaluated and most of parents encourage their children to study go to library.

✓ I'm not sure about all Chinese kids, but I guess Chinese kids often go to the library because in China higher education is highly valued and most parents encourage their children to study and go to the library.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library'. 'All about Chinese kids' should be 'about all Chinese kids'. 'The higher education' should be 'higher education' without 'the'. 'Highly evaluated' is incorrect; 'highly valued' is the correct phrase. 'Most of parents' should be 'most parents'. The phrase 'encourage their children to study go to library' is incorrect; it should be 'encourage their children to study and go to the library'.