图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đầy đủ nhưng hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và chú ý đến cấu trúc câu để tự nhiên hơn.

示例: Yes, I often go to the library on weekends to finish my assignments because it offers many reliable books and resources for my research.

建议: Bạn nên tránh lặp lại ý đã nói trước đó và chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ như chia động từ cho đúng. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I usually do my assignments in the library because it is quiet, which helps me concentrate better.

建议: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chưa chính xác. Bạn nên dùng thì quá khứ cho hành động trong quá khứ và diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn.

示例: Yes, I used to go to the library with my father when I was a kid. He guided me in reading books, and I am very thankful to him for that.

建议: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng, dùng từ chính xác và câu ngắn gọn hơn.

示例: I think many Chinese kids don't often go to the library because modern technology and online games distract them from reading books.

× I usually go to the library on the weekend to finish my assignments because this place is a very reliable resource with a lot of books here and a lot of knowledge that I can research to have more reference.

✓ I usually go to the library at the weekend to finish my assignments because this place is a very reliable resource with a lot of books here and a lot of knowledge that I can research to have more reference.

The preposition 'on' is typically used with days and dates, while 'at' is used with specific times or periods like 'the weekend'. In British English, 'at the weekend' is correct, whereas 'on the weekend' is more common in American English. Since the context is general, 'at the weekend' is preferred here.

× It's so quiet and that give me more space to concentrate better.

✓ It's so quiet and that gives me more space to concentrate better.

The subject 'that' is singular, so the verb should be 'gives' to agree in number. Using 'give' is incorrect because it is the base form used with plural subjects or with 'I/you/we/they'.

× My father is the one who go with me.

✓ My father is the one who went with me.

The relative clause refers to a past event, so the verb should be in the past tense 'went' instead of the base form 'go' to maintain tense consistency.

× He's the guidance of me in reading book way.

✓ He's my guide in the way of reading books.

The phrase 'guidance of me' is incorrect; 'my guide' is more natural. Also, 'reading book way' is awkward; 'the way of reading books' is clearer. Prepositions and noun forms need correction for natural expression.

× So I really thankful to him about that.

✓ So I am really thankful to him for that.

The sentence lacks the verb 'am' after 'I' to form the correct structure 'I am thankful'. Also, the preposition 'for' is used with 'thankful' to indicate the reason.

× I think the Chinese get down one really want to go to the library, because now that is with the advanced of modern world, we have a lot of games on the Internet that's so hard for them to avoid the games to read the books.

✓ I think Chinese children really want to go to the library, but because of the advancement of the modern world, we have a lot of games on the Internet, so it's hard for them to avoid games and read books.

The original sentence is confusing and contains multiple errors in word choice, structure, and prepositions. 'Get down one' is incorrect and unclear. 'That is with the advanced of modern world' is ungrammatical; it should be 'because of the advancement of the modern world'. Also, 'that's so hard for them to avoid the games to read the books' is awkward; it should be 'it's hard for them to avoid games and read books'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.