图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，建议简洁明了地表达是否经常去图书馆，并说明原因。

示例: I used to go to the library often, but now I don't go as much because I prefer studying at home where it's quieter and warmer.

建议: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议直接回答主要活动，并用连词连接补充细节，使表达更连贯。

示例: I usually borrow books from the library because that's its main function. Besides that, I sometimes write papers there because it's a quiet place.

建议: 回答基本清楚，但时态使用不当，建议使用过去时态，并补充更多细节说明原因。

示例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because there wasn't one in my hometown.

建议: 回答重复且表达不流畅，建议简洁明了地说明情况，并使用连词使句子更连贯。

示例: From what I know, Chinese kids didn't often go to the library in the past because there weren't many libraries available for children.

× I had to often go to the library, but now not often because I'm not really too loud and cold and now I.

✓ I often had to go to the library, but now not often because I'm not really too loud and cold.

副词“often”应放在助动词“had to”之后，正确的顺序是“had to often go”改为“often had to go”。此外，句子后半部分表达不清，去掉多余部分使句子更通顺。

× In the library I usually borrow books and and I think it's the main function for the library and.

✓ In the library, I usually borrow books, and I think that's the main function of the library.

句中重复使用“and and”是错误的，且句尾多余“and”应去掉。连接词使用应简洁明确。

× Other size that I use to write books and write papers there, but now I mainly our books.

✓ Besides that, I used to write books and papers there, but now I mainly borrow books.

“Other size”应为“Besides that”或“Otherwise”，且“use to”应为“used to”，表示过去习惯。动词“our”应为“borrow”。

× No, I was a child. I never go to the library because in my hometown there is no library.

✓ No, when I was a child, I never went to the library because in my hometown there was no library.

描述过去的动作应使用过去时，“go”应改为“went”，“is”应改为“was”。

× As I know Chinese kids in the past to never go to the library because in in in China, in China there there wasn't so many libraries for kids there for kids.

✓ As I know, Chinese kids in the past never went to the library because in China there weren't many libraries for kids.

“wasn't so many libraries”应改为“weren't many libraries”，主语“libraries”为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式。