图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and improving sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: No, I don't often go to the library because there isn't one near my house, and I don't have much free time to travel there. Therefore, I usually read books online since it's more convenient.

建议: Focus on clear and grammatically correct sentences. Avoid repetition and use linking words to organise your answer logically.

示例: In the library, I usually read books. Additionally, if I need to print documents, I use their printer, and I also access their computers for research.

建议: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples.

示例: Yes, when I was a kid, I often used my school library to read both fiction and non-fiction books. It was a great way to spend time with friends, and we often shared books with each other.

建议: Make your answer more natural by simplifying sentence structure and using appropriate linking words. Avoid redundancy and improve vocabulary usage.

示例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library, especially the ones in their schools. They spend time there doing research and reading both fiction and non-fiction books.

× No, I really don't go to library because there is no library near to my house and I really don't have much free time to commute.

✓ No, I really don't go to the library because there is no library near my house and I really don't have much free time to commute.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'near to' is incorrect; 'near' should be used without 'to'. Therefore, it should be 'go to the library' and 'near my house'.

× No, I really don't go to library because there is no library near to my house and I really don't have much free time to commute.

✓ No, I really don't go to the library because there is no library near my house and I really don't have much free time to commute.

The preposition 'near' does not require 'to' after it. The correct phrase is 'near my house', not 'near to my house'. This is a common prepositional error.

× To go to commute to the library, I often read online books because it's more convenient.

✓ Instead of commuting to the library, I often read online books because it's more convenient.

The phrase 'To go to commute to the library' is awkward and incorrect. The correct structure is to use 'Instead of commuting to the library' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× I usually go and read some books and if I need some paper to be print out I use the printer over there and can use and can access their computers as well for using the computers.

✓ I usually go and read some books, and if I need some paper to be printed out, I use the printer over there and can access their computers as well.

The phrase 'to be print out' is incorrect; it should be 'to be printed out' (past participle). Also, 'for using the computers' is redundant after 'can access their computers'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× if I need some paper to be print out I use the printer over there

✓ if I need some paper to be printed out, I use the printer over there

The verb 'print' should be in the past participle form 'printed' when used in the passive infinitive 'to be printed out'. This is necessary to form the correct passive structure.

× I usually use the library that we have in our school to read some books like fictions and non fictions one, which is a really great time to spend with friends and we can share same books.

✓ I usually use the library that we have in our school to read some books like fiction and non-fiction ones, which is a really great time to spend with friends and we can share the same books.

'Fictions' and 'non fictions' are incorrect; 'fiction' and 'non-fiction' are uncountable or used as adjectives. Also, 'one' should be plural 'ones' to agree with 'books'. 'Same books' needs the definite article 'the' to be correct.

× we can share same books.

✓ we can share the same books.

The phrase 'same books' requires the definite article 'the' to specify particular books shared among people.

× Yes, I have seen some videos that Chinese kids often go to the library because they also have libraries in their school with in which they can spend their time doing research and read some fictional and non fictional books.

✓ Yes, I have seen some videos that Chinese kids often go to the library because they also have libraries in their school in which they can spend their time doing research and reading some fiction and non-fiction books.

The phrase 'with in which' is incorrect; it should be 'in which'. Also, 'read' should be 'reading' to maintain parallel structure with 'doing research'. 'Fictional and non fictional' should be 'fiction and non-fiction' as these are the correct terms.