图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，句子结构复杂且冗长。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用连接词自然衔接细节。

示例: Yes, I often go to the library because I am a graduate student studying social work. I usually read books about family and childhood social work to support my research.

建议: 回答内容与问题不符，表达混乱且不连贯。建议直接回答在图书馆的活动，使用清晰的句子和连接词。

示例: In the library, I usually read academic books and work on my research projects. I spend most of my time studying and taking notes.

建议: 回答表达不清，语法错误较多，信息不具体。建议简洁明了地说明过去去图书馆的频率和原因。

示例: When I was a child, I rarely went to the library because I lived in the countryside. Instead, I read books that my parents bought for me.

建议: 回答中有双重否定和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议用简单句表达观点，并用连接词说明原因。

示例: I think Chinese kids do not often go to the library because many of them read books online. Also, the hot weather makes it less comfortable to visit libraries.

× I am a graduate student which study in social work because every day I should learn some literatures about the social work such as the family social work and childhood social work books.

✓ I am a graduate student who studies social work because every day I should learn some literature about social work such as family social work and childhood social work books.

这里“which”用于指人不正确，应该用“who”；“study”应为第三人称单数形式“studies”，因为主语是单数“student”；“literatures”是不可数名词，应该用单数形式“literature”；“the family social work and childhood social work books”中“the”不必要，且表达更自然应去掉。

× I am a graduate student which study in social work because every day I should learn some literatures about the social work such as the family social work and childhood social work books.

✓ I am a graduate student who studies social work because every day I should learn some literature about social work such as family social work and childhood social work books.

“study”应改为“studies”，因为主语是第三人称单数，动词需要加-s。

× I am a graduate student which study in social work because every day I should learn some literatures about the social work such as the family social work and childhood social work books.

✓ I am a graduate student who studies social work because every day I should learn some literature about social work such as family social work and childhood social work books.

“study in social work”中的“in”不合适，正确表达应为“study social work”，即直接跟专业名称。

× In the morning I usually go traveling at 8 P 8:00 AM and then I will bring some research on my research study and afternoon I will do some exercise.

✓ In the morning I usually go traveling at 8:00 AM and then I will bring some research for my research study and in the afternoon I will do some exercise.

“bring some research on my research study”中“on”用法不当，应改为“for”；“afternoon”前缺少介词“in”；“8 P 8:00 AM”中“P”多余，应去掉。

× Almost a month because when I was a child I live in the countryside where is Heaven's Library, so I only can read books which buy for me.

✓ Almost a month because when I was a child I lived in the countryside where there is Heaven's Library, so I could only read books which were bought for me.

“live”应为过去式“lived”，因为描述过去；“where is Heaven's Library”语序错误，应为“where there is Heaven's Library”；“only can”语序不正确，应为“could only”；“which buy for me”缺少被动语态，应为“which were bought for me”。

× I think Chinese kids isn't not isn't often go to the library because in the Internet many Chinese kids are read books online, so they don't want to go to library and the weather is very hot.

✓ I think Chinese kids don't often go to the library because on the Internet many Chinese kids read books online, so they don't want to go to the library and the weather is very hot.

“isn't not isn't”重复且错误，应改为“don't”；“go”前应加助动词“do”构成否定；“in the Internet”应为“on the Internet”；“are read books”错误，应为“read books”；“go to library”缺少冠词“the”。