图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'yeah' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, use correct tense consistently and keep your answer concise and clear. For example, start with a direct answer and then add a reason or detail using linking words.

示例: No, I don't often go to the library because there isn't one near my house. However, when I was at university, I used to visit the library frequently to study and borrow books.

建议: Avoid repeating filler words and try to use linking words like 'and' or 'because' to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, use present tense consistently when talking about usual activities. Be specific about your activities to enrich your answer.

示例: In the library, I usually look for books related to my studies and borrow them. Because it is a quiet place, I enjoy studying there as it helps me concentrate better.

建议: Try to avoid hesitation sounds like 'uh' and 'umm' and use complete sentences. Also, clarify your points with proper grammar and linking words. For example, explain the situation clearly and use past tense consistently.

示例: Not really. As far as I remember, my school did not have a library for younger students. There was a library, but it was only accessible to students in higher grades, so I could not use it when I was in grade eight.

建议: Avoid asking questions back to the examiner and try to give a more confident and complete answer. You can express your lack of knowledge politely and add a general comment to enrich your response.

示例: I am not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library because I have not interacted with many Chinese students. However, I believe that many children around the world use libraries to help with their studies.

× No, I don't go, uh, to the library, uh, as I don't have any library near my house.

✓ No, I don't go to the library because I don't have any library near my house.

The phrase 'as I don't have any library near my house' is awkward and incorrect in this context. Using 'because' is more appropriate to express reason in English. Also, removing unnecessary fillers like 'uh' improves clarity.

× Yeah, when I was in my university, uh, I go to, I went to the library most of the times, not now.

✓ Yeah, when I was at university, I went to the library most of the time, but not now.

The phrase 'I go to, I went to' mixes present and past tense incorrectly. Since the time is in the past ('when I was in university'), the verb should be in past tense 'went'. Also, 'most of the times' should be 'most of the time' as 'time' is uncountable here. 'At university' is the correct preposition.

× In the library, uh, mostly I check the bookshelves, uh, for the books that I need in my studies.

✓ In the library, I mostly check the bookshelves for the books that I need for my studies.

The adverb 'mostly' should be placed before the verb 'check' for correct adverb placement. Also, 'in my studies' should be 'for my studies' to correctly express purpose.

× Uh, most of the time I borrow books from the library and it was a quiet place, so I love to study there.

✓ Most of the time, I borrowed books from the library, and it was a quiet place, so I loved to study there.

Since the context is past, verbs should be in past tense: 'borrow' to 'borrowed' and 'love' to 'loved'. Also, adding a comma after 'Most of the time' improves sentence clarity.

× Not really. Uh, as far as I, umm, remember that when I was a kid, I don't have any library in my school.

✓ Not really. As far as I remember, when I was a kid, I didn't have any library in my school.

The phrase 'I don't have' is present tense but the context is past ('when I was a kid'), so it should be 'I didn't have'. Also, removing fillers like 'uh' and 'umm' improves clarity.

× Yeah, there is one, but that is only allowed for the higher grades at the school.

✓ Yes, there was one, but it was only allowed for the higher grades at the school.

Since the context is past, 'there is' should be 'there was'. Also, 'that is only allowed' should be 'it was only allowed' to maintain past tense consistency.

× So when I was in eight.

✓ So when I was in eighth grade.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'grade' after 'eighth' clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence structure.

× Uh I don't know about them. Did they go to the library or not? As I'm a Pakistani and I never had any interaction with Chinese students so I don't know about.

✓ I don't know about them. Do they go to the library or not? As I'm Pakistani and I have never had any interaction with Chinese students, so I don't know about it.

The sentence 'I don't know about' is incomplete; it should be 'I don't know about it'. Also, 'Did they go' should be 'Do they go' to match the present tense question. 'I'm a Pakistani' is better as 'I'm Pakistani' for natural expression. 'Never had' should be 'have never had' to match present perfect tense.