图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用正确的时态和句型，避免重复和不连贯的表达。可以简洁明了地说明不常去图书馆的原因。

示例: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer studying in my room where it's quiet and comfortable. I usually only go there when I have a final exam to prepare for.

建议: 回答较为简单，语法和用词有待改进。建议使用更自然的表达，并且使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: As I mentioned, I usually go to the library to study for my final exams. There, I look for information in textbooks to help me understand the subjects better.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和更丰富的词汇，同时避免重复。

示例: When I was a kid, I preferred outdoor activities like playing basketball or biking around the city because I found sitting in the library boring.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，建议使用正确的表达方式，避免重复和不准确的词汇。可以更具体地说明中国孩子喜欢去图书馆的原因。

示例: Unlike me, most Chinese kids are bookworms who enjoy reading. I believe reading helps them broaden their horizons and gain more knowledge.

× No I don't like go to library.

✓ No, I don't like going to the library.

动词like后面应接动名词形式，表示喜欢做某事。go应改为going。

× No I don't like go to library.

✓ No, I don't like going to the library.

library前应加定冠词the，且library为单数名词，前面应有冠词。

× Staying at my own rooms means better air conditioner, no noise and snakes so I can get get close to my hands Unless a final exam is coming or unless.

✓ Staying in my own room means better air conditioning, no noise, and no distractions, so I can concentrate better unless a final exam is coming.

rooms应为单数room，air conditioner应为air conditioning，snakes用词不当，应为distractions或其他合适词。句子结构混乱，需调整使表达清晰。

× I go to library for studying for final exams, so I usually go to libraries for looking for some information in textbooks.

✓ I go to the library to study for final exams, so I usually go to libraries to look for some information in textbooks.

动词go后接不定式to do，not for doing。studying和looking应改为不定式形式study和look。

× I go to library for studying for final exams, so I usually go to libraries for looking for some information in textbooks.

✓ I go to the library to study for final exams, so I usually go to libraries to look for some information in textbooks.

library前应加定冠词the。

× Now as a kid, I prefer to to act, have some activities outdoors, like playing basketball or just just biking around the city.

✓ When I was a kid, I preferred to act and have some activities outdoors, like playing basketball or just biking around the city.

表达过去习惯应使用过去时prefer改为preferred。activities前应加some，重复to和just应去掉。

× Now as a kid, I prefer to to act, have some activities outdoors, like playing basketball or just just biking around the city.

✓ When I was a kid, I preferred to act and have some activities outdoors, like playing basketball or just biking around the city.

描述过去的习惯动作，动词应使用过去时。

× I think sitting in the library really boring.

✓ I think sitting in the library is really boring.

形容词boring前应有系动词is，构成完整句子。

× Yet, not like me, most of Chinese kids are bookworms.

✓ Well, unlike me, most Chinese kids are bookworms.

not like me用法不当，应改为unlike me。

× They like readings.

✓ They like reading.

like后接动名词reading，readings为复数名词，通常不用于此处。

× I think reading books could broaden their horizons and give them more knowledge about knowledges.

✓ I think reading books can broaden their horizons and give them more knowledge.

knowledge是不可数名词，无复数形式knowledges，应去掉复数形式。